goba            Sun May 23 15:14:38 2004 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /phpdoc/en  preface.xml 
  Log:
  little cleanup and better wording for the history link
  
http://cvs.php.net/diff.php/phpdoc/en/preface.xml?r1=1.27&r2=1.28&ty=u
Index: phpdoc/en/preface.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.27 phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.28
--- phpdoc/en/preface.xml:1.27  Tue Sep  9 14:50:31 2003
+++ phpdoc/en/preface.xml       Sun May 23 15:14:38 2004
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.27 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.28 $ -->
 
  <preface id="preface">
   <title>Preface</title>
@@ -28,17 +28,12 @@
   <para>
    You can download this manual in several formats at <ulink
    url="&url.php.doc.downloads;">&url.php.doc.downloads;</ulink>.
-<!-- 
-   The <ulink url="&url.php.docs.downloads">downloads</ulink> are updated as
-   the content changes.
--->
    More information about how this manual is developed can be found in the
-   <link linkend="about">'About the manual'</link> appendix.
-  </para>
-  
-  <para>
-   See also <link linkend="history">PHP History</link>
+   <link linkend="about">'About the manual'</link> appendix. If you are
+   interested in the <link linkend="history">history of PHP</link>,
+   visit the relevant appendix.
   </para>
+ 
  </preface>
 
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