sean            Mon Jan 10 11:54:21 2005 EDT

  Modified files:              
    /phpdoc/en/language/oop5    magic.xml 
  Log:
  more grammar
  
http://cvs.php.net/diff.php/phpdoc/en/language/oop5/magic.xml?r1=1.7&r2=1.8&ty=u
Index: phpdoc/en/language/oop5/magic.xml
diff -u phpdoc/en/language/oop5/magic.xml:1.7 
phpdoc/en/language/oop5/magic.xml:1.8
--- phpdoc/en/language/oop5/magic.xml:1.7       Mon Jan 10 11:44:13 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/language/oop5/magic.xml   Mon Jan 10 11:54:21 2005
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.7 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.8 $ -->
  <sect1 id="language.oop5.magic">
   <title>Magic Methods</title>
   <para>
@@ -33,22 +33,22 @@
    <para>
     <function>serialize</function> checks if your class has a function with
     the magic name <literal>__sleep</literal>. If so, that function is
-    ran prior to any serialization. It can clean up the object
+    executed prior to any serialization. It can clean up the object
     and is supposed to return an array with the names of all variables
     of that object that should be serialized.
    </para>
    <para>
     The intended use of <literal>__sleep</literal> is to close any
-    database connections that object may have, commit pending
+    database connections that the object may have, commit pending
     data or perform similar cleanup tasks. Also, the function is
-    useful if you have very large objects which need not be
+    useful if you have very large objects which do not need to be
     saved completely.
    </para>
    <para>
     Conversely, <function>unserialize</function> checks for the
     presence of a function with the magic name 
     <literal>__wakeup</literal>. If present, this function can
-    reconstruct any resources that object may have.
+    reconstruct any resources that the object may have.
    </para>
    <para>
     The intended use of <literal>__wakeup</literal> is to

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