gwynne          Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007 UTC

  Modified files:              
    /phpdoc/en/internals/pdo    building.xml error-handling.xml 
                                implementing.xml index.xml intro.xml 
                                pdo-dbh-t.xml pdo-stmt-t.xml 
                                preparation.xml prerequisites.xml 
  Log:
  - Fixed several spelling and grammatical errors in the PDO documentation.
  - Removed displayed author information from the PDO documentation front page.
  
  
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/building.xml:1.3 
phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/building.xml:1.4
--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/building.xml:1.3    Sat Mar  3 22:31:02 2007
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/building.xml        Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,18 +1,18 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.4 $ -->
 <sect1 id="internals.pdo.building">
  <title>Building</title>
  <para>
   The build process is designed to work with PEAR (see <ulink
   url="&url.php.pear;"/> for more information about
   PEAR). There are two files that are used to assist in configuring your
-  package for building. The first is config.m4 which is the autoconf
-  configuration file for all platforms except Win32. The second is config.w32
-  which a build configuration file for use on Win32. Skeleton files for
-  these are built for you when you first set up your project. You then need
-  to customize them to fit the needs of your project.  Once you've customized
-  your config files, you can build your driver using the following sequence
-  of commands:
+  package for building. The first is config.m4 which is the
+  <command>autoconf</command> configuration file for all platforms except
+  Win32. The second is config.w32 which is a build configuration file for use
+  on Win32. Skeleton files for these are built for you when you first set up
+  your project. You then need to customize them to fit the needs of your
+  project.  Once you've customized your config files, you can build your driver
+  using the following sequence of commands:
  </para>
 
  <para>
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/error-handling.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/error-handling.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/error-handling.xml:1.2      Tue Oct  4 19:55:07 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/error-handling.xml  Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,16 +1,16 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <sect1 id="internals.pdo.error-handling">
  <title>Error handling</title>
  <para>
   Error handling is implemented using a hand-shaking protocol between 
   PDO and the database driver code. The database driver code
-  signals PDO than an error has occurred via a failure
+  signals PDO that an error has occurred via a failure
   (<literal>0</literal>) return from any of the interface functions. If a zero
-  is returned, the field <parameter>error_code</parameter> in the control 
block appropriate to the
-  context (either the pdo_dbh_t or pdo_stmt_t block). In practice, it is
-  probably a good idea to set the field in both blocks to the same value to
-  ensure the correct one is getting used.
+  is returned, set the field <parameter>error_code</parameter> in the control
+  block appropriate to the context (either the pdo_dbh_t or pdo_stmt_t block).
+  In practice, it is probably a good idea to set the field in both blocks to
+  the same value to ensure the correct one is getting used.
  </para>
 
  <para>
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@
   </listitem>
   <listitem>
    <para>
-    A descriptive string. This string can contain anything additional
+    A descriptive string. This string can contain any additional
     information related to the failure. Database drivers typically include
     information such as an error message, code location of the failure, and
     any additional descriptive information the driver developer feels
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/implementing.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/implementing.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/implementing.xml:1.2        Thu Dec  8 12:10:51 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/implementing.xml    Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <sect1 id="internals.pdo.implementing">
  <title>Fleshing out your skeleton</title>
  <sect2>
@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@
    <note>
     <para>
      Despite being documented here, the PDO driver interface does not specify
-     that his function be present; it is merely a convenient way to handle
+     that this function be present; it is merely a convenient way to handle
      errors, and it just happens to be equally convenient for the majority of
      database client library APIs to structure your driver implementation in
      this way.
@@ -354,14 +354,14 @@
    </para>
    <para>
     One very important responsibility of this function is the processing of SQL
-    statement parameters. At the time of this call, PDO does not if your driver
-    supports binding parameters into prepared statements, nor does it know if
-    it supports named or positional parameter naming conventions.
+    statement parameters. At the time of this call, PDO does not know if your
+    driver supports binding parameters into prepared statements, nor does it
+    know if it supports named or positional parameter naming conventions.
    </para>
    <para>
     Your driver is responsible for setting
     <literal>stmt-&gt;supports_placeholders</literal> as appropriate for the
-    underlying database.  This may involved some run-time determination on the
+    underlying database.  This may involve some run-time determination on the
     part of your driver, if this setting depends on the version of the database
     server to which it is connected.  If your driver doesn't directly support
     both named and positional parameter conventions, you should use the
@@ -399,7 +399,7 @@
     <constant>PDO_PLACEHOLDER_NONE</constant>.  If the driver doesn't support 
prepare statements at all, then this function should simply allocate any state 
that it might need, and then return:
    </para>
    <example>
-    <title>implementing preparer for drivers that don't support native 
prepared statements</title>
+    <title>Implementing preparer for drivers that don't support native 
prepared statements</title>
     <programlisting role="c"><![CDATA[
 static int SKEL_handle_preparer(pdo_dbh_t *dbh, const char *sql,
     long sql_len, pdo_stmt_t *stmt, zval *driver_options TSRMLS_DC)
@@ -935,9 +935,10 @@
 
    <para>
     The results of this fetch are driver dependent and the data is usually
-    stored in the driver_data member of pdo_stmt_t object. The ori and offset
-    parameters are only meaningful if the statement represents a scrollable
-    cursor. This function returns 1 for success or 0 in the event of failure.
+    stored in the driver_data member of the pdo_stmt_t object. The ori and
+    offset parameters are only meaningful if the statement represents a
+    scrollable cursor. This function returns 1 for success or 0 in the event of
+    failure.
    </para>
   </sect3>
   <sect3>
@@ -1047,8 +1048,8 @@
     <function>PDOStatement::fetch</function> calls.
    </para>
    <para>
-    If this is a bound parameter, the is_param flag in the param structure,
-    otherwise, the param structure refers to a bound column.
+    If this is a bound parameter, the is_param flag in the param structure is
+    set, otherwise the param structure refers to a bound column.
    </para>
    <para>
     This function returns 1 for success or 0 in the event of failure.
@@ -1227,7 +1228,7 @@
    </warning>
 
    <para>
-    This function will be called by PDO to retrieve meta-data from the
+    This function will be called by PDO to retrieve meta data from the
     specified column.
    </para>
    <variablelist>
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/index.xml:1.4 
phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/index.xml:1.5
--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/index.xml:1.4       Mon Oct  3 22:02:15 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/index.xml   Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.4 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.5 $ -->
 <!-- 
   Authors:
     Bill Abt and Rick McGuire of IBM
@@ -9,47 +9,6 @@
 -->
 
 <chapter id="internals.pdo">
- <chapterinfo>
-  <author>
-   <firstname>Bill</firstname>
-   <surname>Abt</surname>
-   <affiliation>
-    <shortaffil>IBM</shortaffil>
-   </affiliation>
-  </author>
-  <author>
-   <firstname>Rick</firstname>
-   <surname>McGuire</surname>
-   <affiliation>
-    <shortaffil>IBM</shortaffil>
-   </affiliation>
-  </author>
-  <author>
-   <firstname>Wez</firstname>
-   <surname>Furlong</surname>
-   <affiliation>
-    <shortaffil>OmniTI</shortaffil>
-   </affiliation>
-  </author>
-  <copyright>
-   <year>2005</year>
-   <holder>IBM Corporation</holder>
-  </copyright>
-  <copyright>
-   <year>2005</year>
-   <holder>the PHP Documentation Group</holder>
-  </copyright>
-  <abstract>
-   <para>
-    The purpose of this How-To is to provide a basic understanding of the steps
-    required to write a database driver that interfaces with the PDO layer.
-    Please note that this is still an evolving API and as such, subject to
-    change. This document was prepared based on version 0.3 of PDO.
-    The learning curve is steep; expect to spend a lot of time on the
-    prerequisites.
-   </para>
-  </abstract>
- </chapterinfo>
 
  <title>PDO Driver How-To</title>
  &internals.pdo.intro;
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/intro.xml:1.1 
phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/intro.xml:1.2
--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/intro.xml:1.1       Mon Oct  3 22:02:16 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/intro.xml   Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.1 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
 <sect1 id="internals.pdo.intro">
  <title>A brief note about this How-To</title>
  <para>
@@ -8,6 +8,13 @@
   to assist in the development of drivers for more databases and to
   encourage the emerging standard for database access in PHP.
  </para>
+ 
+ <para>
+  Please note that this is still an evolving API and as such, subject to
+  change. This document was prepared based on version 0.3 of PDO.
+  The learning curve is steep; expect to spend a lot of time on the
+  prerequisites.
+ </para>
 </sect1>
 <!-- Keep this comment at the end of the file
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/pdo-dbh-t.xml:1.1 
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--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/pdo-dbh-t.xml:1.1   Mon Oct  3 22:02:16 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/pdo-dbh-t.xml       Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.1 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
 <sect1 id="internals.pdo.pdo-dbh-t">
  <title>pdo_dbh_t definition</title>
  <para>
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
     If your database client library API operates by fetching data into a
     caller-supplied buffer, you should set this flag to 1 during your
     <function>SKEL_handle_factory</function>.  When set, PDO will call your
-    <function>SKEL_stmt_describer</function> earlier that it would
+    <function>SKEL_stmt_describer</function> earlier than it would
     otherwise.  This early call allows you to determine those buffer sizes
     and issue appropriate calls to the database client library.
    </para>
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@
     this value to the maximum length that can be taken up by a single
     character when it is quoted by your
     <function>SKEL_handle_quoter</function> function.  This value is used to
-    calculate the amount of buffer space required when PDO it executes the
+    calculate the amount of buffer space required when PDO executes the
     statement.
    </para>
   </callout>
@@ -175,8 +175,8 @@
     <constant>PDO_CASE_NATURAL</constant> (this is actually the default).
     If the column names are always returned in upper case, set it to
     <constant>PDO_CASE_UPPER</constant>.  If the column names are always
-    return in lower case, set it to <constant>PDO_CASE_LOWER</constant>.
-    The value you set it used to determine if PDO should perform case
+    returned in lower case, set it to <constant>PDO_CASE_LOWER</constant>.
+    The value you set is used to determine if PDO should perform case
     folding when the user sets the <constant>PDO_ATTR_CASE</constant>
     attribute.
    </para>
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/pdo-stmt-t.xml:1.1 
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--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/pdo-stmt-t.xml:1.1  Mon Oct  3 22:02:16 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/pdo-stmt-t.xml      Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.1 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
 <sect1 id="internals.pdo.pdo_stmt_t">
  <title>pdo_stmt_t definition</title>
  <para>
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
   <callout arearefs="internals.pdo.stmt.co.holder"
    id="internals.pdo.stmt.co.holder-co">
    <para>
-    Discussed in more detail in <xref linkend="internals.pdo.preparer"/>
+    Discussed in more detail in <xref linkend="internals.pdo.preparer"/>.
    </para>
   </callout>
   <callout arearefs="internals.pdo.stmt.co.colcount"
@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@
     <function>SKEL_stmt_execute</function> but with some database
     implementations, the column count may not be available until
     <function>SKEL_stmt_fetch</function> has been called at least once.
-    Drivers that <function>SKEL_stmt_next_rowset</function> should update the
-    column count when a new rowset is available.
+    Drivers that implement <function>SKEL_stmt_next_rowset</function> should
+    update the column count when a new rowset is available.
    </para>
   </callout>
   <callout arearefs="internals.pdo.stmt.co.cols"
@@ -123,8 +123,8 @@
     <parameter>name</parameter>, <parameter>namelen</parameter> and
     <parameter>param_type</parameter> members for each column.
     The <parameter>name</parameter> is expected to be allocated using
-    <function>emalloc</function>; PDO will <function>efree</function> at the
-    appropriate time.
+    <function>emalloc</function>; PDO will call <function>efree</function> at
+    the appropriate time.
    </para>
   </callout>
  </calloutlist>
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/preparation.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/preparation.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/preparation.xml:1.2 Thu Dec  8 12:10:51 2005
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/preparation.xml     Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <sect1 id="internals.pdo.preparation">
  <title>Preparation and Housekeeping</title>
  <sect2>
@@ -23,6 +23,7 @@
   php_pdo_SKEL_int.h   <co id="internals.pdo.layout.co.priv"/>
   SKEL_dbh.c           <co id="internals.pdo.layout.co.dbh"/>
   SKEL_stmt.c          <co id="internals.pdo.layout.co.stmt"/>
+  tests/
   </screen>
   <calloutlist>
    <callout arearefs="internals.pdo.layout.co.m4">
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diff -u phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/prerequisites.xml:1.2 
phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/prerequisites.xml:1.3
--- phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/prerequisites.xml:1.2       Sat Mar  3 22:31:02 2007
+++ phpdoc/en/internals/pdo/prerequisites.xml   Wed Jun  6 05:20:48 2007
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="iso-8859-1"?>
-<!-- $Revision: 1.2 $ -->
+<!-- $Revision: 1.3 $ -->
 <sect1 id="internals.pdo.prerequisites">
  <title>Prerequisites</title>
  <para>
@@ -17,13 +17,13 @@
      <para>A working development environment:</para>
      <orderedlist>
        <listitem>
-         <para>Other Unix: standard development tools supplied by vendor plus 
the GNU development tool set; </para>
+         <para>Linux: standard development tools, gcc, ld, make, autoconf, 
automake, etc., versions dependent on distribution;</para>
        </listitem>
        <listitem>
-         <para>Win32: Visual Studio compiler suite;</para>
+         <para>Other Unix: standard development tools supplied by vendor plus 
the GNU development tool set; </para>
        </listitem>
        <listitem>
-         <para>Linux: standard development tools, gcc, ld, make, autoconf, 
automake, etc., versions dependent on distribution;</para>
+         <para>Win32: Visual Studio compiler suite;</para>
        </listitem>
      </orderedlist>
    </listitem>
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
      <para>A working PDO environment (can be installed using 'sudo pecl 
install PDO'), including the headers which will be needed to access the PDO 
type definitions and function declarations;</para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
-     <para>A good working knowledge of the 'C' programming language;</para>
+     <para>A good working knowledge of the C programming language;</para>
    </listitem>
    <listitem>
      <para>A good working knowledge of the way to write a PHP extension;

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