Thank you for you quick response, Daniel. I changed "listed" because I found it a little confusing and repeating, but now that you tell me that, I realize you are right. Thank you again!
Monnier, Braian Iván. On 5 January 2011 19:22, Daniel Brown <danbr...@php.net> wrote: > On Wed, Jan 5, 2011 at 17:09, Braian Iván Monnier <x1v...@php.net> wrote: > > Hello everybody. > > > > Can anyone take a look at this update, please? It's the first time I've > done > > a doc update and I'm not sure if I did it correctly. Thanks in advance! > > > > Monnier, Braian Iván. > > > > The patch looks good, but I would reword this: > > "but it is appointed through the mhash documentation" > > To this: > > "but it is listed in the mhash documentation" > > More similar to the original, really, because if it is "appointed > through" something, that would mean it was designated by the > documentation, as if the documentation directed the code, and not the > other way around. > > Other than that, looks like you're good to commit. > > -- > </Daniel P. Brown> > Network Infrastructure Manager > Documentation, Webmaster Teams > http://www.php.net/ >
