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>From ad63aea181860e241a0748f29ef4396192f52ef8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Carlo Stemberger <carlo.stember...@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 11 Jan 2011 03:31:24 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Proof-reading documentation.

---
 install.sh |  110 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------------
 1 files changed, 58 insertions(+), 52 deletions(-)

diff --git a/install.sh b/install.sh
index 57a420f..6558de6 100755
--- a/install.sh
+++ b/install.sh
@@ -303,31 +303,34 @@ ENVIRONMENT
 	To influence the program's behaviour, set the following
 	environment variables or leave the default values.
 
-	APT_OPTIONS  extra parameters sent to apt for installing packages
-                     (set to '$APT_OPTIONS').
-	HOSTNAME     the name of the machine (set to '$HOSTNAME')
-	SD_DEVICE    the character device to access the microSD card
-                     (set to '$SD_DEVICE')
-	SD_SYS_BLK   the directory under /sys/block that refers to the microSD card
-                     (set to '$SD_SYS_BLK', or derived from the value of SD_DEVICE)
-	SD_PART1_FS  the filesystem for the first microSD card partition,
-                     i.e. the one containing the uImage.bin (set to
-                     '$SD_PART1_FS', possible values are ext2/vfat, 
-                     also ext3 when using Qi as bootloader)
-	SD_PART1_SIZE    number of megabytes for first partition (set to '$SD_PART1_SIZE')
-	SD_SWAP_SIZE     number of megabytes of swap partition (set to '$SD_SWAP_SIZE')
-	INST_DIR     the directory where the microSD card partitions
-                     will be mounted to (set to '$INST_DIR')
-	INST_MIRROR  the Debian mirror used during installation, it
-                     should be set to a mirror nearby that carries armel
-                     binaries for unstable and experimental (set to
-                     '$INST_MIRROR')
-	LOCALEPURGE  Set to 'true' iff the package of the same name shall
-                     be installed. It reduces disk space enormously,
-                     but needs user interaction for the install (set to
-                     '$LOCALEPURGE').
-	APT_RECOMMENDS   control if APT should install recommends by default
-                     (set to '$APT_RECOMMENDS', possible values are false/true)
+	APT_OPTIONS  extra parameters sent to apt for installing packages (set
+                     to '$APT_OPTIONS').
+	HOSTNAME     the name of the machine (set to '$HOSTNAME').
+	SD_DEVICE    the character device to access the microSD card (set to
+                     '$SD_DEVICE').
+	SD_SYS_BLK   the directory under /sys/block that refers to the microSD
+                     card (set to '$SD_SYS_BLK', or derived from the
+                     value of SD_DEVICE).
+	SD_PART1_FS  the filesystem for the first microSD card partition, i.e.
+                     the one containing the uImage.bin (set to '$SD_PART1_FS', possible
+                     values are ext2/vfat, also ext3 when using Qi as
+                     bootloader).
+	SD_PART1_SIZE
+                     number of megabytes for first partition (set to '$SD_PART1_SIZE').
+	SD_SWAP_SIZE
+                     number of megabytes of swap partition (set to '$SD_SWAP_SIZE').
+	INST_DIR     the directory where the microSD card partitions will be
+                     mounted to (set to '$INST_DIR').
+	INST_MIRROR  the Debian mirror used during installation, it should be
+                     set to a mirror nearby that carries armel binaries for
+                     unstable and experimental (set to
+                     '$INST_MIRROR').
+	LOCALEPURGE  set this to true, if you want to install the package of the
+                     same name. It reduces disk space enormously, but needs user
+                     interaction for the install (set to '$LOCALEPURGE').
+	APT_RECOMMENDS
+                     control if APT should install recommends by default (set to
+                     '$APT_RECOMMENDS', possible values are false/true).
 	BOOTSTRAPPER determines the bootstrapper to use, should be set to
                      deboostrap or cdebootstrap - cdebootstrap is somewhat
                      faster and you may have to "opkg install perl", but it
@@ -335,38 +338,41 @@ ENVIRONMENT
                      For debootstrap please do not run anything besides
                      install.sh as you will need all your memory.
 	CDEBOOTSTRAP_EXTRA_FLAGS
-                     Parameters to be added to invocation of cdebootstrap,
-                     only active if BOOTSTRAPPER is not set to debootstrap.
-	DASH_BINSH   configure dash as default /bin/sh (set to '$DASH_BINSH',
-                     possible values are true/false)
+                     parameters to be added to invocation of cdebootstrap, only
+                     active if BOOTSTRAPPER is not set to debootstrap.
+	DASH_BINSH   configure dash as default /bin/sh (set to '$DASH_BINSH', possible
+                     values are true/false).
 	DEBOOTSTRAP_EXTRA_FLAGS
-                     Parameters to be added to invocation of debootstrap,
-                     only active if BOOTSTRAPPER is not set to cdebootstrap.
+                     parameters to be added to invocation of debootstrap, only
+                     active if BOOTSTRAPPER is not set to cdebootstrap.
 	FSO_MIRROR   the Debian freesmartphone.org repository (set to
-                     '$FSO_MIRROR')
-	FSO_DEVICE   the device the installation is being performed on
-                     (set to '$FSO_DEVICE', default to autodetection,
-                     possible values are gta01/gta02)
-	QI           if you use Qi bootloader set this to true 
-                     (set to '$QI')
-	QI_VERBOSE_BOOT  set this to true if you want to see the kernel messages 
-                     do this only when QI=true (set to '$QI_VERBOSE_BOOT')
-	RDATEHOST    machine with which to sync against with ntp (set to $RDATEHOST)
-	SINGLE_PART  set this to true if only one partition should be created
-                     this is true by default for QI=true and false if SD_PART1_FS=vfat
-                     (set to '$SINGLE_PART')
+                     '$FSO_MIRROR').
+	FSO_DEVICE   the device the installation is being performed on (set to
+                     '$FSO_DEVICE', default to autodetection, possible values are
+                     gta01/gta02).
+	QI           if you use Qi bootloader set this to true (set to '$QI').
+	QI_VERBOSE_BOOT
+                     set this to true if you want to see the kernel messages; do
+                     this only when QI=true (set to '$QI_VERBOSE_BOOT').
+	RDATEHOST    machine with which to sync against with ntp (set to
+                     '$RDATEHOST').
+	SINGLE_PART  set this to true if only one partition should be created;
+                     this is true by default for QI=true and false if
+                     SD_PART1_FS=vfat (set to '$SINGLE_PART').
 	TRAYER       name of package to fill the menu bar, supported are
-	             'trayer' and 'stalonetray' (set to '$TRAYER')
+	             'trayer' and 'stalonetray' (set to '$TRAYER').
 	TESTHOST     name of machine that should be tested for availability
-                     (set to '$TESTHOST')
+                     (set to '$TESTHOST').
 	VERBOSE      increase amount of information that is forwarded to stdout
-	DISPLAY_MANAGER  choose the Display Manager to be installed
-                     (default to nodm, possible values are any *dm
-                     package in the Debian archive, which could require
-                     a LOT of disk space; set to none if you do not
-                     want a Display Manager)
-	ZHONE        set this to true to install the Zhone GUI (set to '$ZHONE')
-	ROOT_PASSWORD  the password for the root account (set to '$ROOT_PASSWORD')
+                     (set to '$VERBOSE').
+	DISPLAY_MANAGER
+                     choose the Display Manager to be installed (default to
+                     '$DISPLAY_MANAGER', possible values are any *dm package in the Debian
+                     archive, which could require a LOT of disk space; set this
+                     to none if you do not want a Display Manager).
+	ZHONE        set this to true to install the Zhone GUI (set to '$ZHONE').
+	ROOT_PASSWORD
+                     the password for the root account (set to '$ROOT_PASSWORD').
 
     Stages:
 
-- 
1.7.2.3

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