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Please readd the screenshots using the default design ( https://l10n.kde.org/docs/screenshots.php ) Thanks INLINE COMMENTS > index.docbook:70 > +<para> > +&plasma; provides a modern and customizable environment for running your > favorite applications and accessing your information wherever it may be. > Other common attributes of the &plasma; Desktop include advanced window > management and desktop effects, support for KDE Plasma Widgets, integrated > search, hardware management and a high degree of customizability. &plasma; > is simple by default and powerful when needed. This means that a user can > configure pretty much anything about the desktop, but doesn't have to. It is > KDE's flagship product. > +</para> for KDE Plasma Widgets -> do we need KDE here? > index.docbook:107 > +<itemizedlist> > +<listitem><para>A menu in the top left corner, which gives you options > regarding widgets and activities > +</para></listitem> This is called the Desktop Toolbox? > index.docbook:110-111 > + > +<listitem><para>Hovering over the same corner will show all open apps > +</para></listitem> > + Hmm, does not work for me using up to date neon-devedition-unstable > index.docbook:275 > +<sect2 id="clocks"> > +<title>Clocks</title> > + Clocks appear in systemtray > index.docbook:308 > +<sect3 id="calendar"> > +<title>Calendar</title> > + Calender appears in systemtray and is already part of the clock, so why a separate calendar her? > index.docbook:372-373 > > -<sect2 id="panel-digital-clock"> > -<title>Digital Clock</title> > +<sect2 id="twod-plots"> > +<title>2D Plots</title> > not in the panel building plasma from source or using neon we should stick with the defaults here, because everybody has different favorite applets this couls be in a section with additional applets. > index.docbook:397 > + > +<sect2 id="calculator"> > +<title>Calculator</title> see twod-plots > index.docbook:407 > +<sect2 id="color-picker"> > +<title>Color Picker</title> > see twod-plots > index.docbook:416 > +<sect2 id="comic-viewer"> > +<title>Comic Viewer</title> > see twod-plots > index.docbook:424 > + > +<sect2 id="monitoring-widgets"> > +<title>Monitoring Widgets</title> see twod-plots > index.docbook:446 > +<para> > +On the right of any panel is a button which opens the <guimenu>Panel > Settings</guimenu> menu. This menu allows you to change the size of the > panel; drag the arrows pointing left to change the minimum width of the panel > and drag the arrows pointing right to change the maximum width. The > <guibutton>Screen Edge</guibutton> button acts like a handle to move the > panel to any side of the screen. The <guibutton>Height</guibutton> button can > be dragged up and down to change the height of the panel. <guibutton>Add > Widgets</guibutton> and <guibutton>Add Spacer</guibutton> are > self-explanatory. Under <guibutton>More Settings</guibutton>, one can change > the panel's alignment and visibility. That menu also allows the user to > increase the panel's minimum size to its maximum (<guilabel>Maximize > Panel</guilabel>), remove the panel, and prevent widgets from being edited > (<guilabel>Lock Widgets</guilabel>). > </para> True only for unlocked widgets, so this info should be added here > index.docbook:479 > +<para> > +To change the &plasma; theme or download a new one through &knewstuff; open > the <menuchoice><guimenu>Appearance</guimenu> <guimenuitem>Desktop > Theme</guimenuitem></menuchoice> page in the &systemsettings;. > +</para> The <emphasis role="bold">Dashboard</emphasis> gets those &plasma; widgets in front of you, much like the <guilabel>Show desktop</guilabel> functionality you are used to from traditional desktops. is missing from the pevious version > index.docbook:496 > +<para> > +Use the button to open the <guilabel>Plasma Search</guilabel> > &systemsettings; module and configure where and what to search for in > &krunner;. > +</para> <inlinemediaobject><imageobject><imagedata fileref="krunner-configure.png" format="PNG"/></imageobject></inlinemediaobject> is missing here REPOSITORY R119 Plasma Desktop REVISION DETAIL https://phabricator.kde.org/D5189 To: ivanthekdefan, ltoscano, yurchor, lueck Cc: kde-doc-english, plasma-devel, progwolff, lesliezhai, ali-mohamed, jensreuterberg, abetts, sebas, apol