hmmm... more typos... and a bit of style fixes

On Fri, 2 Mar 2001, Ian C. Sison wrote:

> In an uprecedented move this week, the Philippine Linux Users Group [PLUG]

unprecedented

> the popular operating system, a virtual "who's who" in the local linux and
> open source scene have banded together to establish a mailing list
> specifically focusing on helping interested industry professionals,

drop the word "specifically", replace "focusing" with "focused"

> As a matter of policy each volunteer-expert is given a specific topic of

drop the phrase "As a matter of policy" and go straight to "Each
volunteer-expert" 

> True to the nature of open source software, membership and registration to
> the mailing list is totally free of any charge, and the resident experts

Chop this into two sentences to read "free of any charge. The resident
experts..."

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