Hi, Ian, WAF WG-

Ian Hickson wrote:
On Wed, 6 Dec 2006, Doug Schepers wrote:
"The XML Binding Language (XBL) describes the ability to associate elements in one document with script, event handlers, CSS, and more complex content models in another document." The first sentence in the specification is not correct. XBL bindings can be in the same document as the bound elements.

True, but that's not really important. The important case is the external document case, which is what the abstract highlights.

Sure. But I thought it was important that readers get an understanding of the scope of the technology, and not be bogged down in seeming contradictions.


Besides your version sounding much more marketting-y and longer, I don't see that it's especially better.

Naturally, you already understand what XBL is for, but you aren't your audience.

I don't care about the length or the actual wording. I just want the abstract to be accurate and reasonably comprehensive. I don't think that the current version is. Maybe others do.

But in the end, I think there will be enough supporting documentation that as long as the technology itself is well-defined, the quality of the prose is of lesser importance.

Regards-
-Doug

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