The latest editor's draft can be found here:

  http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/access-control/


On Tue, 11 Dec 2007 02:06:33 +0100, Elliotte Rusty Harold <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
Two suggestions:

1. There should be a comma after "to be able to access it"

Added.


2. I'm not quite sure what you're driving at, but I think example.com would be a better choice than hello-world.invalid.

We need two distinct domain names so using example.com twice is a non-starter. As both of these are allowed per RFC 2606 I'm not sure what the problem is.


Also, if you want [access-control] at the beginning of the subject line, you should set your mailto links so that happens automatically. e.g.

mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]

Done.


I also took some time to revise the introduction text before it to (hopefully) make it even more clear.


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