1. In the "Future directions and plans" section, I would add the following
sentences at the beginning. "In creating an ontology, one may consider
using
the pre-coordinated approach and/or the post-coordinated approach. It will
be
interesting to explore these approaches in the future
development/evolution of
SenseLab ontologies."
The short discussion we had about this was not directly related to the
SenseLab ontologies. Addressing issues of post- vs. pre-coordination would
need to take much more than just a short sentence and is probably beyond the
scope of the document.
The difference between "Knowledgebase" and "Knowledge base" is mostly
linguistic and not ontological. Since my native language is German, and
German tends to be a synthetic language [1], I erroneously used the first
option...
2. In the "Conclusion" section, I would change the last sentence slightly
and
add another sentence after it. So it reads: "Since the quality of these
tools
is rapidly improving, this may cease to be an issue in the near future.
SenseLab ontologies may help drive the improvement of current ontology
editors."
I added "[...] The detailed analysis of the experiences with the SenseLab
ontologies and other complex biomedical ontologies may help drive the
improvement of current ontology editors."
[1] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Synthetic_language
Cheers,
Matthias Samwald
