Hi,
This is a QA Review comment for "Selectors API"
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/
2006-05-25
1st WD

About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/

* Abstract
        [[[
        This specification defines two methods for retrieving Element nodes in 
the
        DOM using a group of selectors as defined in [Selectors].
        ]]]

We encourage you to not use "this specification" to start sentences. Maybe:

        [[[
        Selectors API defines two methods for retrieving Element nodes in the
        DOM using a group of selectors as defined in [Selectors].
        ]]]

* Introduction typo?
  http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-selectors-api-20060525/#introduction

        [[[
        [Selectors], mostly used in CSS [CSS21] context, provides a way of 
        matching such a set of elements.
        ]]]
to replace with
        [[[  
        Selectors [Selectors] mostly used in CSS [CSS21] context, 
        provides a way of matching such a set of elements.
        ]]]

* Typo 
        [[[
        Using psuedo-elements …
        ]]]
        



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