Marcos
Thanks for taking this pass.
I note a number of editorial corrections that I believe should be
made before publishing:
1. Introduction should not have normative statements, and these
replicate material later in the document, so change "MAY" to "can" in
2 places.
2. Section 4, #4, change "must" to "MUST"
3. Section 4, #6, change "Security" to "security"
4. Section 5.3.1, include blank line between bullet with DIGIT and
next bullet
5. Section 6, replace ".." with "." in editorial note
6. Section 6.1, change "DSAwithSHA" to "DSAwithSHA1"
7. Section 7.2, change link to be from "signature file", it is
currently broken
8. End of section 8, remove example from sentence, change "For
example, end-users" to "End-users" and combine with previous paragraph.
9. Add note to [XMLDSIG-Properties] reference as follows (at end of
reference entry):
Note, section 9 includes additions made in the XML Security WG to the
XML Signature Properties editors draft (subsequent to First Public
Working Draft) that are used in this specification.
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I also suggest you make sure that all changes in the working draft are
also reflected in what is checked into the Editors draft in CVS so we
can make changes as needed without losing these latest changes for the
working draft (the only difference need be the setting as editors vs
working draft I think).
I also notice on a substantive level that you changed the namespace.
Was the reason to match a pre-existing choice for the Packaging and
Configuration? Is this an item for discussion?
The other changes looked good, thanks for improving the draft.
regards, Frederick
Frederick Hirsch
Nokia
On Mar 25, 2009, at 11:41 AM, ext Marcos Caceres wrote:
Hi All,
A new Working Draft of the Widgets 1.0: Dig Sig is ready to be
published [1]. I've put the date of publication as the 31 of March,
with the hope the W3C will publish it some time next week. If
possible, the editors would be greatly appreciate if someone could
check over it before it gets published. Please send any feedback you
might have by the end of the week.
Kind regards,
Marcos
[1] http://dev.w3.org/2006/waf/widgets-digsig/
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