Final hi! Josh, Addressed your final set of editorial issues. If satisfied with the corrections, please give us an OK for the DoC :)
On Thu, Jun 18, 2009 at 5:54 PM, timeless<timel...@gmail.com> wrote: > Date: Thu, Jun 18, 2009 at 4:52 PM > > 4:15 PM me: (e.g., floating and application mode) > > either floating mode and application mode > or the floating and application modes Removed the example text. The spec says that the Window Modes spec specifies that. I don't want to make that normative in P&C only to have it replicated in the other spec (might cause issues). > The following example shows the usage of the name element. > > <widget xmlns="http://www.w3.org/ns/widgets"> > <name short="Weather"> > The Ultimate Weather Widget > > > probably indent "The" one more space :) Fixed. > _______________________________ > 19 minutes > 4:35 PM me: file identification table > has 3 columns, one is entirely empty Anne wanted us to put something in there (waiting for him to tell us what). I've removed it while we wait. > 4:36 PM Step 1 - Acquire a Potential Zip Archive > Step 1 involves acquiring a potential Zip archive > -- Potential v. potential? Heading convention. Will leave as is. > 4:37 PM A user agent will acquire a potential Zip archive from a data > transfer protocol that either labels resources with a media type (e.g. > [HTTP]) or from a data transfer protocol that does not label resources > with a media type (e.g., BitTorrent, Bluetooth, etc.). > > A tautology ... > (yes, i know we're trying to say this, but is there a better way to write > it?) I think I will leave it. The point here is to alert the reader that we handle both cases. > 4:39 PM Step 2 - Verify the Zip archive > The previous step used more uppercase letters :) Fixed. > 4:41 PM must treat the value as null(i.e., not as empty string and not > as the text string "null"). > add a space between 'null' and '(' Fixed > 4:42 PM Configuration Defaults > this table uses column headers and footers, the other ones don't. (just > noting) True. The reason I added them is that when the spec is printed, this table does not fit on one page. I will leave the others for now. > 4:43 PM must attempt to locate digital signatures for the widget (step ). > step number missing Fixed > 4:44 PM So, for example, "fr,en-us,en,en-au,en,fr,en" would become > "fr,en-us,en-au". > there should be an example of a tripple (zh-hans-cn) added. > ________________________________ > 7 minutes > 4:52 PM me: ignore means that a user agent must act as if the element, > or fileis not present. > add a space between 'file' and 'is' Fixed. -- Marcos Caceres http://datadriven.com.au