On Mon Mar 4, 2024 at 2:22 PM CET, Christoph Heiss wrote:
> The `root@pam` user is notified via email about available updates. Click the
> 'Changelog' button in the GUI to see more details about the selected update.
>
> -You need a valid subscription key to access the `pve-enterprise` repository.
> -Different support levels are available. Further details can be found at
> -{pricing-url}.
> +As soon as updates are available, the `root@pam` user is notified via email
> +about the newly available packages. From the GUI, the 'Changelog' button in
> the
> +GUI can be used to see more details about the selected update.
> +Thus, you will never miss important security fixes.
The section about the 'Changelog' button is duplicated, it is already in
the paragraph above.
Also `GUI` appears twice in the same sentence, I would propose something
like this (if we use the second sentence):
The 'Changelog' button in the GUI can be used to see more
details about the selected update.
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