On February 29, 2024 11:41 am, Stefan Hanreich wrote:
> Signed-off-by: Stefan Hanreich <s.hanre...@proxmox.com>
> ---
> pve-network.adoc | 15 +++++++++------
> 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/pve-network.adoc b/pve-network.adoc
> index d1ec64b..a5ad9b4 100644
> --- a/pve-network.adoc
> +++ b/pve-network.adoc
> @@ -13,11 +13,12 @@ page contains the complete format description. All {pve}
> tools try hard to keep
> direct user modifications, but using the GUI is still preferable, because it
> protects you from errors.
>
> -A 'vmbr' interface is needed to connect guests to the underlying physical
> -network. They are a Linux bridge which can be thought of as a virtual switch
> -to which the guests and physical interfaces are connected to. This section
> -provides some examples on how the network can be set up to accomodate
> different
> -use cases like redundancy with a xref:sysadmin_network_bond['bond'],
> +A bridge interface (commonly called 'vmbrX') is needed to connect guests to
> the
> +underlying physical network. They are a Linux bridge which can be thought
> of as
both pre-existing, but while we are here:
doubled space before the 'They'
"*A* bridge interface .. *They* are.."
I'd just combine the two?
A Linux bridge interface .. . It can be though ..
> +a virtual switch to which the guests and physical interfaces are connected
> to.
also pre-existing:
the first 'to' here can go IMHO ;)
a virtual switch which the .. are connected to.
> +This section provides some examples on how the network can be set up to
> +accomodate different use cases like redundancy with a
> +xref:sysadmin_network_bond['bond'],
> xref:sysadmin_network_vlan['vlans'] or
> xref:sysadmin_network_routed['routed'] and
> xref:sysadmin_network_masquerading['NAT'] setups.
> @@ -75,7 +76,9 @@ We currently use the following naming conventions for
> device names:
> scheme is used for {pve} hosts which were installed before the 5.0
> release. When upgrading to 5.0, the names are kept as-is.
>
> -* Bridge names: `vmbr[N]`, where 0 ≤ N ≤ 4094 (`vmbr0` - `vmbr4094`)
> +* Bridge names: Commonly `vmbr[N]`, where 0 ≤ N ≤ 4094 (`vmbr0` -
> `vmbr4094`),
> +but you can use any alphanumeric string that starts with a character and is
> at
> +most 10 characters long.
>
> * Bonds: `bond[N]`, where 0 ≤ N (`bond0`, `bond1`, ...)
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