Éric Araujo <mer...@netwok.org> added the comment: Attached patch adds a missing attribution, a missing bug number, fixes one typo (“content manager”) and five grammar issues.
I haven’t had time to make a full read-through during the last weeks, but here are a few comments about the overall structure of the file: - The introduction is a bit scarce (compare that of 2.6); - “Other Language Changes” sounds strange, given that the previous sections (PEPs) are language as well as library changes → name it something like “Small Language Changes”; - “New, Improved, and Deprecated Modules” are not sorted nor grouped; - Ditto for the bits of advice in the Porting section; - The small sections about Unicode and codecs could be merged; - What Antoine said about “Code repository”. ---------- keywords: +patch Added file: http://bugs.python.org/file20796/whatsnew-fixes.diff _______________________________________ Python tracker <rep...@bugs.python.org> <http://bugs.python.org/issue11071> _______________________________________ _______________________________________________ Python-bugs-list mailing list Unsubscribe: http://mail.python.org/mailman/options/python-bugs-list/archive%40mail-archive.com