New submission from Hobs:

New-style and old-style class expalanation in the datamodel section has minor 
grammatical errors and one minor ambiguity that could be improved.

http://docs.python.org/2/reference/datamodel.html#new-style-and-classic-classes

* "independently of" should always be "indepenent of"
* single hyphens (-) should be double-hyphens (--) for an m-dash
* "flavour" should be "flavor" (used 100x more often in docs.python)
* "only the symantics of..." is ambiguous. can't tell if 'only' modifies 
'symantics' or 'new-style classes'?

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assignee: docs@python
components: Documentation
files: datamodel-reference-docs.patch
keywords: patch
messages: 180812
nosy: Hobson.Lane, docs@python
priority: normal
severity: normal
status: open
title: Data model documentation grammar
type: enhancement
versions: Python 2.7
Added file: http://bugs.python.org/file28876/datamodel-reference-docs.patch

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