R. David Murray added the comment:

Your formulation is more concise, thank you.

I suggest dropping the word 'additionally'.  Also, "how it does" would be 
better phrased as "how it changes", I think.  (It really should be "whether and 
how it changes", but in deference to Anatoly's 'advanced English' comment I'm 
willing to let that imprecision slide).

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