Steve Holden wrote: > Ilias Lazaridis wrote: >> Ilias Lazaridis wrote: >>> comp.lang.python / comp.lang.ruby >>> >>> I would like to ask for feedback on the Process Definition and >>> Presentation. [...]
>> Based on the summary of the feedback so far, I've focused on one page >> - the main page: >> >> Although it needs a review from a native english speaker, I think that >> this should give now a clear summary, without forcing the reader to >> think very much: >> >> " >> Lazaridis ReEngineering is specialized on System Evaluation and >> Reengineering [...] >> Our services are specialized on software-companies. The services use a > > for software developers and vendors. [...] Our services are specialized for the business domain "software development" > It certainly reads more like I'd be talking to a human being now. Very nice. Thank you for your gentle corrections (i've applied all, exept the one above). > regards > Steve . -- http://lazaridis.com -- http://mail.python.org/mailman/listinfo/python-list
