On 07/26/2017 06:44 AM, Paolo Bonzini wrote:
> We don't want the page to become too long, but these are good suggestions.
> 
> Also tone down the sentence about using the latest release or latest git
> tree, though we do prefer those.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Paolo Bonzini <pbonz...@redhat.com>
> ---
>  contribute.md              |  2 +-
>  contribute/report-a-bug.md | 13 ++++++++++---
>  2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> 

>  * Reproduce the problem directly with a QEMU command-line.  Avoid frontends 
> and management stacks, to ensure that the bug is in QEMU itself and not in a 
> frontend.
>  
> -* Include as information about the guest (operating system, version, 
> 32/64-bit).
> +* Include as information about the host and guest (operating system, 
> version, 32/64-bit).

Grammar. Your choice of which fix to use:
s/as //
s/as information/as much information as possible/

With that fixed:
Reviewed-by: Eric Blake <ebl...@redhat.com>

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