On 27.04.20 17:57, Alexander Duyck wrote:
> On Mon, Apr 27, 2020 at 8:11 AM David Hildenbrand <da...@redhat.com> wrote:
>>
>> On 27.04.20 17:08, Alexander Duyck wrote:
>>> On Mon, Apr 27, 2020 at 1:15 AM David Hildenbrand <da...@redhat.com> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> There is only one wrong comment remaining I think. Something like
>>>>
>>>> diff --git a/hw/virtio/virtio-balloon.c b/hw/virtio/virtio-balloon.c
>>>> index a1d6fb52c8..1b2127c04c 100644
>>>> --- a/hw/virtio/virtio-balloon.c
>>>> +++ b/hw/virtio/virtio-balloon.c
>>>> @@ -554,8 +554,8 @@ static void 
>>>> virtio_balloon_free_page_stop(VirtIOBalloon *s)
>>>>           */
>>>>          qemu_mutex_lock(&s->free_page_lock);
>>>>          /*
>>>> -         * The guest hasn't done the reporting, so host sends a 
>>>> notification
>>>> -         * to the guest to actively stop the reporting.
>>>> +         * The guest isn't done with hinting, so the host sends a 
>>>> notification
>>>> +         * to the guest to actively stop the hinting.
>>>
>>> I'll probably tweak it slightly and drop the "with". So the comment will 
>>> read:
>>>         /*
>>>          * The guest isn't done hinting, so host sends a notification
>>
>> I always feel like "so host sends" sounds wrong ("the host"). But I am
>> not a native speaker.
> 
> Actually it might read better to get rid of "the host" entirely to
> make it more of an imperative statement rather than a declarative one.
> Maybe something more like:
>         /*
>          * The guest isn't done hinting, so send a notification
>          * to the guest to actively stop the hinting.
>          */
> 

Sounds good :)

-- 
Thanks,

David / dhildenb


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