Thanks for the review! We will try to make a pass next week!
From: QUIC <[email protected]> on behalf of Gorry Fairhurst <[email protected]> Date: Wednesday, 12. May 2021 at 17:12 To: QUIC WG <[email protected]> Subject: : Working Group Last Call: QUIC Ops Drafts I reviewed manageability, and think this is mostly ready - with a few issues, to which I added: Manageability: PMTU<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=e2a8274e-bd331e7f-e2a867d5-86e2237f51fb-3b74e0b770f17799&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F366> #365 ( with suggestions) Manageability: Is dropping intended to be random?<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=9c6a3c69-c3f10558-9c6a7cf2-86e2237f51fb-1115ab3b8e91d485&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F365> #365 ( with suggestions) Manageability: does the endpoint change address using a NAPT?<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=f1b8ca47-ae23f376-f1b88adc-86e2237f51fb-2ccd88f2c78c5f46&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F364> #364 ( with suggestions) Manageability: Not so trivial ACK detection for TCP<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=5e2bece7-01b0d5d6-5e2bac7c-86e2237f51fb-f0aed0dc60ac1036&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F363> #363 ( with suggestions) Manageability: Detailed Review Comments - NiTs<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=7e44b87a-21df814b-7e44f8e1-86e2237f51fb-caa8768de50af553&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts%2Fissues%2F362> #362 (mostly with suggestions) The issues I raised in the first review appear now to have been resolved, many thanks, Gorry On Thu, May 6, 2021, at 16:37, Martin Thomson wrote: I just read through applicability and it's good. I found a few errors, but nothing truly shocking. The editorial standard is pretty high. I've submitted pull requests for those things I found. Starting on the other now. On Tue, Apr 27, 2021, at 04:09, Matt Joras wrote: Hello, The Ops drafts have already gone through one round of last call, where there was good feedback and engagement driving further changes. Since then we have new revisions to the drafts. It is the opinion of the editors and chairs that these are ready for another last call. Thus this email announces another Working Group Last Call (WGLC) for the following documents: * Manageability of the QUIC Transport Protocol https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-manageability-11 * Applicability of the QUIC Transport Protocol https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-quic-applicability-11 The WGLC will run for two weeks, ending on 10 May 2021. Please review the documents above and open issues for your review comments in our repository at https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts<https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=845f1e05-dbc42734-845f5e9e-86e2237f51fb-c442fbf02bb2f6e5&q=1&e=24cb6fbc-307b-47b1-a1e6-aa56d5501879&u=https%3A%2F%2Fgithub.com%2Fquicwg%2Fops-drafts>. You may also send comments to [email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>. Thanks, Lars, Lucas, Matt QUIC WG Chairs
