Hi all, Thanks for working on the manageability draft. I found this draft very helpful and well written, however, I was expecting a bit more background information and clarification on the recommendations in the abstract and/or in the introduction section to set the tone for the rest of the document.
I have filed issues (see below) based on my AD reviews, the issues should be very easy to fix. I have created separate PRs on minor things so that they can be applied separately. I think this draft needs a new version. Issues: https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/408#issue-1062225684 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/409#issue-1062231494 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/410#issue-1062245329 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/411#issue-1062254414 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/412#issue-1062263339 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/413#issue-1062273089 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/414#issue-1062278056 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/415#issue-1062280988 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/416#issue-1062286211 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/417#issue-1062295585 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/418#issue-1062305817 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/419#issue-1062307575 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/420#issue-1062317621 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/421#issue-1062324375 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/422#issue-1062336007 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/423#issue-1062338849 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/issues/427#issue-1062358371 PRs: https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/424#issue-1062348373 https://github.com/quicwg/ops-drafts/pull/425#issue-1062351475 BR Zahed
