Hi Martin, thanks for your review. We created PR for all your points!
Mirja On 21.04.22, 18:57, "Martin Duke via Datatracker" <[email protected]> wrote: Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-quic-manageability-16: Yes When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-quic-manageability/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- 2.1 Retry and VN packets “are not encrypted or protected in any way.” While this is made clear later in the document, it would be good to way that Retry packets are (forgibly) integrity-protected and that QUIC TPs later authenticate most of the contents of these packets. 2.4 s/byes/bytes 3.1.1 it’s worth noting that compatible version negotiation can cause the version to change mid-handshake. The true signal is a server-chosen version field echoed in a client packet. 4.7 please update the QUIC-lb reference to draft-duke/ietf-quic-retry-offload.
