Martin,

Thank you for doing a detailed review of draft-ietf-regext-login-security.  I 
provide my responses to your feedback embedded below.

—

JG

[cid:[email protected]]

James Gould
Distinguished Engineer
[email protected]

703-948-3271
12061 Bluemont Way
Reston, VA 20190

Verisign.com<http://verisigninc.com/>

From: regext <[email protected]> on behalf of Martin Casanova 
<[email protected]>
Date: Tuesday, March 26, 2019 at 1:56 PM
To: "[email protected]" <[email protected]>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] review of draft-ietf-regext-login-security-03

Jim

Since we support that draft I started implementing and read it again more 
carefully. I have the following comments / feedback

1. (comment) Event type "cipher" or "tlsProtocol" :

In case the client uses deprecated protocol or cipher we currently hang up the 
TLS connection immediately so there is no possibility to send a type "error" 
security event.
At chapter 3.1 near "exDate" is written that "At expiry there MAY be an error 
to connect or MAY be an error to login." So in case of an error to connect you 
run in the same situation and will not be able to send back a "error" level 
event but thats OK. However it is useful to warn the client during a transition 
period when we know that we are going to disable a certain cipher or TLS 
protocol on a specific day in the future.
JG – Yes, connectivity events like “cipher”, “tlsProtocol”, and “certificate” 
are really only useful when they are provided as a warning with an optional 
exDate to indicate when the event will result in a connection error.  The 
policies for the possible set of events can be defined using the Login Security 
Policy Extension 
(https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gould-regext-login-security-policy), which 
is an extension of the Registry Mapping 
(https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gould-carney-regext-registry).  The clients 
need to look for the security events in the login response to act on them.

2 . (comment) Event type “newPw”:
Here we currently use  2306 “Parameter value policy error” and write in the 
<reason> of <extValue> element that the new password was too weak.
I guess we would use the loginSec Event in the future in case the extension was 
specified at login whether the pw was changed via login-security extension or 
not.

I know that you have foreseen draft-gould-regext-login-security-policy to query 
about password complexity but I think for convenience of the registrar it would 
still be nice to somehow include the password requirement in the response even 
if it is redundant. Otherwise one has to implement 
draft-gould-regext-login-security-policy  at the same time or communicate the 
requirement out of band.

Maybe like that

   S:        <loginSec:event

   S:          type=”newPW”

   S:          value=”expression: 
(?=.*\d)(?=.*[a-zA-Z])(?=.*[\x21-\x2F\x3A-\x40\x5B-\x60\x7B-\x7E]) (?!^\s+) 
(?!.*\s+$)(?!.*\s{2,})^[\x20-\x7e]{16,128}$”

   S:          level=”error”>

   S:          New password does not meet complexity requirements

   S:        </loginSec:event>

   S:    <result code=”2200”>

   S:      <msg>Authentication error</msg>

Are you sure you want to return a 2200 and not a 2306 Parameter value policy 
error in this case (page 10). I don’t see a reason why this should be another 
return code with or without extension.

JG – On the first part of your feedback, I’m not sure that we want to inject 
policy elements into the error response.  Of course the policy information 
could be embedded within the human readable message, such as below.  I don’t 
recommend the client parsing the human readable message for policy information, 
but this would be useful for logging and troubleshooting on the client-side.  
One issue is that the client can only receive the password complexity 
expression upon an error.  It’s best to handle the password complexity 
expression out-of-band or via the Login Security Policy Extension 
(draft-gould-regext-login-security-policy) to enable the client to know about 
the policy prior to an error.

   S:        <loginSec:event

   S:          type=”newPW”

   S:          level=”error”>

   S:          New password does not meet complexity requirement: 
(?=.*\d)(?=.*[a-zA-Z])(?=.*[\x21-\x2F\x3A-\x40\x5B-\x60\x7B-\x7E]) (?!^\s+) 
(?!.*\s+$)(?!.*\s{2,})^[\x20-\x7e]{16,128}$

   S:        </loginSec:event>

JG – On the second part of your feedback, I believe that the login should fail 
if an invalid new password is passed with a 2200 “Authentication error”.  The 
use of 2200 is not normative, so the server could choose a different result 
code, such as 2306.  The Login Security Extension will provide more specific 
information associated with the error.  Are there thoughts from others related 
to which error result code (2200, 2306, or other) should be used for an invalid 
new password and whether it should be normative?

3. (question) Event type "stat" :

How often would you send back this event

   <loginSec:event

     type="stat"

     name="failedLogins"

     level="warning"

     value="100"

     duration="P1D">

     Excessive invalid daily logins

   </loginSec:event>

Only once with first successful login after the series of failed ones or for a 
whole day ? I suggest one time with first successful login.

JG – My thought is that returning the statistical information should not be 
stateful, so that means that the interval would be up to the server (e.g., for 
a one day duration start calculating the statistic based on a start / end of 
midnight UTC), but all applicable events would be returned in all login 
responses.  I do not recommend the server keeping track of which events have 
been returned and which have not been returned.  What are your thoughts on this?

4. (question) In chapter 4.1 EPP <login> Command is written

..

internal contiguous

       whitespace that includes #x9 (tab), #xA (linefeed), #xD (carriage

       return), and #x20 (space) is replaced with a single #x20 (space).

...

Since this is "normal" XML parsing behavior should there not be reference to 
where this is described for general XML processing. (I don't know where that 
would be though)

JG – The choice was to directly include the definition within the draft in 
place of referencing out.  I’m not aware of an RFC that can be referenced for 
the XML processing of an XML schema “token” type.  My recommendation is to 
leave the definition directly in the draft without an external reference.

5.  (suggestion) The element  <loginSec:userAgent> could be more structured to 
make it easier for the registry to parse the different fields and to give a 
hint to the registrar what information should be provided.

Therefore I suggest  child elements for example

<os>           Operating System
<client>      Client technology (eg. java)
<version> Client software version (eg. 1.8.0) etc.

JG – If we were going to make the <loginSec:userAgent> structured, my 
recommendation is to handle it with the following definition:

   <complexType name="userAgentType">

    <sequence>

      <element name="client" type="token"

       minOccurs="0"/>

      <element name="lang" type="token"

       minOccurs="0"/>

      <element name="os" type="token"

       minOccurs="0"/>

    </sequence>

   </complexType>

JG – Below would be an example structured <loginSec:userAgent> element:

   <loginSec:userAgent>

     <loginSec:client>EPP SDK 1.0.0</loginSec:client>

     <loginSec:lang>Java 11.0.2</loginSec:lang>

     <loginSec:os>x86_64 Mac OS X 10.21</loginSec:os>

   </loginSec:userAgent>

JG – What are your thoughts on the structured version of the 
<loginSec:userAgent> element.  If this works, I will revise the draft to 
support it.



Thanks



Martin Casanova



--

---

SWITCH

Martin Casanova, Domain Applications

Werdstrasse 2, P.O. Box, 8021 Zurich, Switzerland

phone +41 44 268 15 55, direct +41 44 268 16 25

[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>, 
www.switch.ch<http://www.switch.ch>



Working for a better digital world
_______________________________________________
regext mailing list
[email protected]
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext

Reply via email to