Michael Smith has posted comments on this change. ( 
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Change subject: IMPALA-12427: Documentation for Workload Management
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Patch Set 8:

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PS8, Line 9: This change adds documentation for the Workload management feature.
nit: management is capitalized most other places.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/22706/8/docs/topics/impala_workload_mgmt.xml
File docs/topics/impala_workload_mgmt.xml:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/22706/8/docs/topics/impala_workload_mgmt.xml@73
PS8, Line 73:         startup flag or maximum queued 
<codeph>query_log_max_queued</codeph> flag, the
I'm not sure "maximum queued" provides any additional clarity on 
"query_log_max_queued". The flag description later on seems sufficient.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/22706/8/docs/topics/impala_workload_mgmt.xml@75
PS8, Line 75:         to the Apache Iceberg table 
<codeph>sys.impala_query_log</codeph>. This table is
I'd suggest also discussing graceful shutdown behavior, where it tries to write 
out the queue before shutdown independent of these parameters.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/22706/8/docs/topics/impala_workload_mgmt.xml@85
PS8, Line 85:         You can query both tables like any other table in 
Impala—simply use any SQL client.
"simply" is generally avoided in technical docs. I'd consider removing this 
sentence altogether - I think it's obvious - or phrase it

> You can query both tables like any other table in Impala using an SQL client.

I'd also move this above the previous paragraph, as it's more related to how 
the table is stored, which also groups the two paragraphs about "telemetry 
move".


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/22706/8/docs/topics/impala_workload_mgmt.xml@135
PS8, Line 135:           <tbody>
Do we have a way to automatically generate this table?


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/22706/8/docs/topics/impala_workload_mgmt.xml@612
PS8, Line 612:         Workload management is configured by startup flags on 
all coordinator processes.
It also needs to be enabled on catalogd, so that the `sys` database and table 
definitions are visible.



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