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Change subject: IMPALA-9910: [DOCS] update retry failed queries query option
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(4 comments)

I have a few suggestions

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/16819/1//COMMIT_MSG
Commit Message:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/16819/1//COMMIT_MSG@9
PS1, Line 9: elaborated the existing content
Can you make these into complete sentences please? Take a look at other Impala 
commit messages to see the standard we are aiming for.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/16819/1/docs/topics/impala_retry_failed_queries.xml
File docs/topics/impala_retry_failed_queries.xml:

http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/16819/1/docs/topics/impala_retry_failed_queries.xml@39
PS1, Line 39:     <p>If a SELECT query fails due to a cluster membership 
change, the Coordinator will cancel and
I think we should try to include "Cluster membership changes typically occur 
when an impalad crashes, or if the node is blacklisted by the Impala 
Coordinator" from the old text.


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/16819/1/docs/topics/impala_retry_failed_queries.xml@40
PS1, Line 40:       unregister the running query and then launch a retry of the 
query. For e.g., if one of the
Instead of "For e.g." I think "For example" is clearer


http://gerrit.cloudera.org:8080/#/c/16819/1/docs/topics/impala_retry_failed_queries.xml@43
PS1, Line 43:       executor nodes. This feature will support retrying the 
entire query and NOT the individual
This feature supports



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