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Ship it!


Looks good overall. Thanks Tim!


docs/mesos-provisioner.md (line 5)
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    It's not just container filesystem spec, right? It also includes runtime 
specification. Can you just say:
    
    ```
    There are multiple container specifications, ...
    ```
    
    For runC, it's only for runtime right? So your next sentense does not sound 
so right. How about this:
    
    ```
    Most of the container specifications, to varying degrees, conflate image 
format specification with other components of a container, including...
    ```



docs/mesos-provisioner.md (line 7)
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    s/R/r/
    
    s/different formats/different image formats/



docs/mesos-provisioner.md (line 13)
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    I wouldn't mention the runtime configuration here since it's pretty 
confusing. I would rather add a section later to explain the runtime 
configuration part (but not in this review probably).



docs/mesos-provisioner.md (line 51)
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    Why this limitation. I think we can still use image-in-volume even if 
command line executor is used, right?



docs/mesos-provisioner.md (line 59)
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    you probably want to explain the backend flag (or add a TODO) since it's 
not quite intuitive what that is.



docs/mesos-provisioner.md (line 63)
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    Kill extra blank line



docs/mesos-provisioner.md (line 67)
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    kill extra blank line


- Jie Yu


On Dec. 4, 2015, 9:26 a.m., Timothy Chen wrote:
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> (Updated Dec. 4, 2015, 9:26 a.m.)
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> Review request for mesos, Jie Yu and Jojy Varghese.
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> Repository: mesos
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> Description
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> Add mesos provisioner doc.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/mesos-provisioner.md PRE-CREATION 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/40211/diff/
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> Testing
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> Thanks,
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> Timothy Chen
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