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Fix it, then Ship it!





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    Maybe `s/change/update/`, since we consistently talk about "reservation 
updates" throughout the patch series?



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    s/reserve/reserves/



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    Maybe ask a native speaker for a second opinion, but "takes" sounds a bit 
weird to me. Maybe "accepts parameters"?
    
    Also, I would propose adding a short summary of what the call *does* with 
these parameters, instead of launching straight into backwards compatibility 
exceptions, something like 
    
    ```
    [...] and the target resources, and updates the reservations of `source` to 
be equal to the reservations of `target`.
    ```



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    Maybe we should also mention here that `source` and `resources` must be 
identical except for their reservations in this case.



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    Mentioning "multiple levels" here feels a bit like an implementation 
detail; from a users perspective we simply allow changing one role to another. 
(also "levels" are not present in this example anyways.)



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    s/fall/for/


- Benno Evers


On Nov. 20, 2019, 2:17 p.m., Benjamin Bannier wrote:
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> (Updated Nov. 20, 2019, 2:17 p.m.)
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> Review request for mesos and Benno Evers.
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> Bugs: MESOS-9993
>     https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/MESOS-9993
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> Repository: mesos
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> Description
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> Updated operator API documention to use rereservation format.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/operator-http-api.md 6cc367dabf3bec507e8d49af54d9aad9ac17471c 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/71741/diff/2/
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