In general, it looks OK. Cliff had previously approved your legal language about licenses, right? And I don't know if you are aware, but the approved form of the Incubator disclaimer is here:
http://incubator.apache.org/incubation/Incubation_Policy.html#Branding Be sure to post a release vote on [email protected] to notify the PMC that you would like to perform a release. --- Noel
