Hi Quentin, Thanks for you review. Your comments will be included in -07 version. See inline.
> On Jul 15, 2023, at 12:37 PM, Quentin Armitage <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Hi, > > I have just become aware of the above draft (version 6), and have noticed the > following > typographical errors: > > 5.2.8 - A closing bracket is missing after "refer to Section 5". See inline. > > 8.2.4. "(FF02:1)" should be "(FF02::1)" and "(FF02:2)" should be "(FF02::2)". See inline. > > In 5.2.8, it is unclear to me what "refer to Section 5" is intended to > convey. The paragraph > itself is already part of Section 5, so the reference is unhelpful. The only > possible > reference that I can see could be relevant would be a reference to Section > 5.1, but that > doesn't seem helpful to me. I changed the reference to 5.2 since this section describes the VRRP protocol fields being referenced in the sentence. Thanks, Acee > > With regards, > > Quentin Armitage > _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
