One of the things I read several times now is that writers often write a great hook- but then write a different story, or their story never lives up to their hook. If you were to take a story you wrote and could change it- or let's pretend you change the first page- how would you now write your "hook"? Some questions: Is there a hook in your latest story? What is a hook anyway? Does it work? Is it possible to make it more powerful and, if so, how? Does the hook feel contrived? Thanks. -C (who is presently wondering if she is hookless or hooking.)
Carole McDonnell_"Then said I: 'Here am I; send me." _ (http://groups.yahoo.com/group/GenreChristianWriters) www.geocities.com/scifiwritir/OreoBlues.html groups.yahoo.com/group/genrechristianwriters _groups.yahoo.com/group/Thecontestinganthologist_ (http://groups.yahoo.com/group/Thecontestinganthologist) (http://groups.yahoo.com/group/EthnicChristianWriters) [Non-text portions of this message have been removed] Community email addresses: Post message: SciFiNoir_Lit@yahoogroups.com Subscribe: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subscribe Digest Mode: [EMAIL PROTECTED] Unsubscribe: [EMAIL PROTECTED]: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SciFiNoir_Lit/ Yahoo! Groups Links <*> To visit your group on the web, go to: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SciFiNoir_Lit/ <*> To unsubscribe from this group, send an email to: [EMAIL PROTECTED] <*> Your use of Yahoo! Groups is subject to: http://docs.yahoo.com/info/terms/
