Re: [aqm] Pete Resnick's No Objection on draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: (with COMMENT)

2015-02-19 Thread Martin Stiemerling

Pete,

Good catch!

Authors & doc shepherd: Did the author sign anything?

If not, we need the pre-5378 boiler plate.

Thanks,

  Martin

Am 19.02.15 um 05:51 schrieb Pete Resnick:

Pete Resnick has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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This document does not have the pre-5378 boilerplate. Have all of the
authors of 2309 actually signed the appropriate things, or does this
document need the pre-5378 boilerplate?




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Re: [aqm] Benoit Claise's Discuss on draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

2015-02-19 Thread Martin Stiemerling

Hi Benoit,





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DISCUSS:
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Hopefully an easy DISCUSS.
   3.  The algorithms that the IETF recommends SHOULD NOT require
operational (especially manual) configuration or tuning.

This sentence above could be understood in different ways. For example,
that any configuration is wrong.
The ability to activate AQM is a good thing IMO.
The section 4.3 title is closer to what you intend to say: "AQM
algorithms deployed SHOULD NOT require operational tuning"
The issue is that you only define what you mean by "operational
configuration" in section 4.3

Proposal:

OLD:
   3.  The algorithms that the IETF recommends SHOULD NOT require
operational (especially manual) configuration or tuning.

NEW:
   3.  AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require tuning of initial or
configuration parameters.


I do not see how your proposal is better than the original text.
The original text says that the IETF is not recommending any operational 
configuration or tuning. You proposal is globally saying that AQM 
algorithms should not require tuning, etc.




OLD:
4.3 AQM algorithms deployed SHOULD NOT require operational tuning

NEW:
4.3 AQM algorithm deployment SHOULD NOT require tuning


I see even less why this change is required and it makes an even 
stronger case. The first statement says that tuning in operations should 
not happen while your statement is saying that in general no tuning is 
required (even before going for operational).


  Martin

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[aqm] Ted Lemon's Yes on draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: (with COMMENT)

2015-02-19 Thread Ted Lemon
Ted Lemon has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: Yes

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COMMENT:
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I'm quite surprised that the introduction doesn't mention the problems
that high or unpredictable latency can cause with flows that are
attempting to do congestion control at the ends (e.g., TCP).   If I were
reading this without already knowing about that, I would assume that the
goal of this document is to reduce latency for the benefit of
applications that require low latency, like VoIP and gaming.   It would
be nice if the introduction made mention of the issue of high latency as
it affects TCP flows.

The document also talks about congestion collapse as a future risk to be
prevented, but I think that this isn't telling the whole story: users of
the Internet see localized congestion collapse quite frequently, and have
done for quite some time.   It's essentially normal network behavior in
hotels, cafes and on airplanes: anywhere where available bandwidth is
substantially short of demand.   I don't think this is a problem with
technical accuracy, but I think someone reading this document who isn't
an expert on congestion control might not realize that this document is
talking about that specific sort of failure mode as well as failures deep
in the network.

I'm really happy to see this document being published.  The above
comments are just suggestions based on my particular concerns about
congestion, and do not reflect any degree of expertise, so if they seem
exceptionally clueless you should just ignore them.


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Re: [aqm] Pete Resnick's No Objection on draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: (with COMMENT)

2015-02-19 Thread Wesley Eddy
On 2/19/2015 7:25 AM, Martin Stiemerling wrote:
> Pete,
> 
> Good catch!
> 
> Authors & doc shepherd: Did the author sign anything?
> 
> If not, we need the pre-5378 boiler plate.
> 


No they didn't sign anything.  In fact many of them have been
difficult/impossible to reach, and the author list on 2309 was the
entire end-to-end RG at the time, so it's quite long.

It seems to me that we certainly need to use the pre-5378 boilerplate.
Thanks for catching this, Pete!


-- 
Wes Eddy
MTI Systems

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[aqm] Kathleen Moriarty's No Objection on draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: (with COMMENT)

2015-02-19 Thread Kathleen Moriarty
Kathleen Moriarty has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-aqm-recommendation-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks for your work on this draft, it looks good.  There are some tiny
nits that the SecDir reviewer found that you might want to consider:
https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg05357.html


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[aqm] ID Tracker State Update Notice:

2015-02-19 Thread IETF Secretariat
IESG state changed to IESG Evaluation::AD Followup from IESG Evaluation
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