Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

[Lucas Pardue]

Hi Rob,

On Thu, 1 Jun 2023, 23:12 Rob Sayre,  wrote:

> Hi,
>
> I put up a PR:
> https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2561
>
> The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English,
> but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the
> passive voice in an unidiomatic way.
>
> I'm not attached to my suggestion, but the current text is a bit off.
>

You're right. Thanks for the suggested alternative, it's clearer and more
direct.

Cheers
Lucas
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Re: [Gen-art] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

[Rob Sayre]

Hi,

I put up a PR:
https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2561

The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English,
but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the
passive voice in an unidiomatic way.

I'm not attached to my suggestion, but the current text is a bit off.

thanks,
Rob


On Wed, May 24, 2023 at 11:12 PM Lars Eggert  wrote:

> Joel, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for
> this document.
>
> Lars
>
>
> > On Mar 18, 2023, at 05:02, Joel Halpern via Datatracker <
> nore...@ietf.org> wrote:
> >
> > Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> > Review result: Ready
> >
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> > Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11
> > Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> > Review Date: 2023-03-17
> > IETF LC End Date: 2023-03-21
> > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> >
> > Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard
> >
> > Major issues: N/A
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> > Minor issues: N/A
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[Gen-art] Review Assignments

[Jean Mahoney via Datatracker]

Hi all,

The following reviewers have assignments:

For telechat 2023-06-08

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Stewart Bryant Last Call 2023-05-29 
draft-ietf-pce-pcep-stateful-pce-gmpls-21

Last calls:

Reviewer   Type  LC end Draft
Matt Joras Last Call 2022-11-03 draft-ietf-stir-messaging-07
Suhas Nandakumar   Last Call 2023-06-13 draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-20
Suhas Nandakumar   Last Call 2023-04-13 draft-ietf-taps-arch-18
Pete Resnick   Last Call 2023-06-02 
draft-ietf-pce-local-protection-enforcement-10
Meral Shirazipour  Last Call 2023-06-15 
draft-ietf-sedate-datetime-extended-08
Dale WorleyLast Call 2023-06-13 draft-ietf-dnssd-update-lease-07
Peter Yee  Last Call 2023-06-08 
draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution-05

Early review requests:

Reviewer   DueDraft
Elwyn Davies   2023-06-09 draft-ietf-drip-registries-09
Matt Joras 2023-06-30 draft-ietf-dprive-unilateral-probing-06

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  Tim Evens
  Thomas Fossati
  Roni Even
  Robert Sparks
  Gyan Mishra
  Linda Dunbar
  Vijay Gurbani
  Mallory Knodel
  Joel Halpern
  Behcet Sarikaya

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