-tp-psc-itu@tools.ietf.org
Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02.txt
Hi,
Regarding the mode and capability discussion, please see if the following
change can resolve the issue:
Section 9.2
OLD:
A mode is a given set of Capabilities. Modes are shorthand;
referring
Hi,
In order to find correct text to reflect the comments that are agreed so far, I
am suggesting the text below.
Please, see inlines starting with [JR]
I erased the parts that do not need further discussion.
s8, definition of Exercise (EXER): Describing EXER as 'replacing' one
of
NR, RR
Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02.txt
Hello Elwyn,
Thanks for your reply.
See my responses in-line [Huub3].
=
On Wed, 2014-02-26 at 16:39 +, Huub Van Helvoort wrote:
Hello Elwyn,
Please find my response in-line [Huub2]
To avoid any confusion I have snipped
See below…
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Sent: Wednesday, March 05, 2014 7:00 AM
To: Huub Van Helvoort; Elwyn Davies
Cc: General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf
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Subject : RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02.txt
See below…
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Sent: Wednesday, March 05, 2014 7:00 AM
To: Huub Van Helvoort; Elwyn Davies
Cc: General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu
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Subject : RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02.txt
Hello Elwyn,
Thanks for your reply.
See my responses in-line [Huub3
, February 26, 2014 2:58 PM
To: Elwyn Davies
Cc: General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu@tools.ietf.org
Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02.txt
Hello Elwyn,
Thanks for your reply.
See my responses in-line [Huub3].
=
On Wed, 2014-02-26 at 16:39 +, Huub
: gen-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02.txt
Shwmae Adrian,
You wrote:
[snip]
Politics! OK - How about we add to either s9.1.1 or s9.2 something like:
I don't think it is politics at all, and I
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02.txt
Hi, Huub.
Thanks for the responses: Agreed bits snipped again.
On Wed, 2014-02-26 at 16:39 +, Huub Van Helvoort wrote:
Hello Elwyn,
Please find my response in-line [Huub2
-psc-itu@tools.ietf.org
Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-psc-itu-02.txt
Hi,
Regarding the mode and capability discussion, please see if the following
change can resolve the issue:
Section 9.2
OLD:
A mode is a given set of Capabilities. Modes are shorthand;
referring
Hello Elwyn,
Please find my response in-line [Huub2]
To avoid any confusion I have snipped the parts that do not need
further expanation.
Minor issues:
s1, next to last para:
This document describes the behavior of the PSC protocol
including
the priority logic and the state
Hi, Huub.
Thanks for the responses: Agreed bits snipped again.
On Wed, 2014-02-26 at 16:39 +, Huub Van Helvoort wrote:
Hello Elwyn,
Please find my response in-line [Huub2]
To avoid any confusion I have snipped the parts that do not need
further expanation.
Minor issues:
s1,
Sut mae, Elwyn-gwas,
[snip]
Politics! OK - How about we add to either s9.1.1 or s9.2 something like:
I don't think it is politics at all, and I don't really like that Huub
referenced this as IETF and ITU-T since both documents are IETF standards track
work.
There are some people who want to
On Mon, 2014-02-24 at 21:50 +, Huub Van Helvoort wrote:
Hello Elwyn,
Thank you for your review.
See my response in-line [Huub]
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
Hello Elwyn,
Thank you for your review.
See my response in-line [Huub]
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call
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