Looks great. FWIW, I had done some editing of Sam's text, included below.
Understanding and creating content
--
* Write. Make a story, poem, report or anything with write. Use
formatting tools to add images or colors. Work together with friends to
write togethe
Peter - are the intro edits I sent going in?
thanks
Sean
On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 3:00 PM, Peter Robinson
wrote:
> It's already in process
>
> On Fri, May 15, 2015 at 1:02 PM, Sam P. wrote:
> > Hi Peter,
> >
> > I think Walter send out a good copy [1] with headers - maybe we could use
> > those
Walter sent some edits, I believe most of those have gone in, we need
to update titles still I believe.
This is what we currently have, the Activities list and layout are now set.
http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
We can tweak the text but I need to have the edits co-ordinated, I
don't
Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, mine were for
the introduction, no reconciliation necessary
Sean
On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson
wrote:
> Walter sent some edits, I believe most of those have gone in, we need
> to update titles still I believe.
>
>
On Sun, 2015-05-17 at 15:14 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
> Peter - Walter's edits were for the Activities descriptions, mine were
> for the introduction, no reconciliation necessary
>
>
> Sean
>
>
>
> On Sat, May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM, Peter Robinson
> wrote:
> Walter sent some edits, I bel
thanks Iain looks good
some typos:
Wwork -> Work
FotoToon -> OK is singular not plural
speech and though -> speech and thought
Paint provides to tools -> Paint provides tools
Make Sugar activities -> Make Sugar Activities / edit existing activities
-> edit existing Activities / Browse activity ->
Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
Fair copy attached.
I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of
Activities in http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
but not in the Walter/Sam contribution.
I think it is the weakest section. Chat jars a bit on the page, a
Many thanks Iain
Fine with me to delete Multimedia section. I feel the existing intro plus
the Activities descriptions will fulfill the role of encouraging the
visitor to download and try SoaS. Walter, Sam, OK with you?
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 6:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas <
i...@browndougla
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
wrote:
> Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
>
> Fair copy attached.
>
> I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of
> Activities in http://spins.stg.fedoraproject.org/en/soas/
> but not in the Walter/Sam contribu
Hi Peter,
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson wrote:
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
> wrote:
> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
> >
> > Fair copy attached.
> >
> > I originally included the section "Multimedia", as it is the set of
> > Activities
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Sam P. wrote:
> Hi Peter,
>
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson wrote:
>>
>> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
>> wrote:
>> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
>> >
>> > Fair copy attached.
>> >
>> > I originally include
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 13:30 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 12:37 PM, Sam P. wrote:
> > Hi Peter,
> >
> > On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson wrote:
> >>
> >> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
> >> wrote:
> >> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful pr
>> > Hi Peter,
>> >
>> > On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson
>> > wrote:
>> >>
>> >> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
>> >> wrote:
>> >> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
>> >> >
>> >> > Fair copy attached.
>> >> >
>> >> > I originally included the sect
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 15:00 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
> >> > Hi Peter,
> >> >
> >> > On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson
> >> > wrote:
> >> >>
> >> >> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
> >> >> wrote:
> >> >> > Thanks, Sean, for the careful proof reading.
> >> >> >
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 3:16 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
wrote:
> On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 15:00 +0100, Peter Robinson wrote:
>> >> > Hi Peter,
>> >> >
>> >> > On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 9:01 PM Peter Robinson
>> >> > wrote:
>> >> >>
>> >> >> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 5:58 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
>> >> >> wr
Iain, Sean, Sam,
_Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
Peter,
when need this be finished?
Gonzalo
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 11:34 AM, Peter Robinson
wrote:
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 3:16 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
> wrote:
> > On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 15:00 +0100, Peter Robinson wro
Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes but Peter doesn't want
to deal with a text file.
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 4:39 PM, Gonzalo Odiard
wrote:
> Iain, Sean, Sam,
>
> _Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
>
> Peter,
> when need this be finished?
>
> Gonzalo
>
>
Peter - here is Iain's document:
http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/marketing/attachments/20150519/bdaf00ca/attachment.html
Sean
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 7:57 PM, Sean DALY wrote:
> Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes but Peter doesn't want
> to deal with a text file.
> Sean
>
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 19:57 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
> Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes
... almost consolidated!
Chat does not really fit in Multimedia, IMHO.
Iain
> but Peter doesn't want to deal with a text file.
>
> Sean
>
>
>
> On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 4:39 PM, Gonzalo
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 8:33 PM, Iain Brown Douglas
wrote:
> On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 19:57 +0200, Sean DALY wrote:
>> Gonzalo - Iain had already consolidated all changes
>
> ... almost consolidated!
>
> Chat does not really fit in Multimedia, IMHO.
It's not in Multimedia, it's in "Going online". Ma
On Tue, May 19, 2015 at 8:01 PM, Sean DALY wrote:
> Peter - here is Iain's document:
>
> http://lists.sugarlabs.org/archive/marketing/attachments/20150519/bdaf00ca/attachment.html
Can we have pure plain text, the web team deals with formatting.
I need to be able to provide it in pure text, I don
On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 11:39 -0300, Gonzalo Odiard wrote:
> Iain, Sean, Sam,
>
>
> _Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
>
Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
My apologies to the other contributors, Sam, Walter and Sean for
clouding their perfectly useful work.
The text that I hav
On Wed, May 20, 2015 at 10:33 AM, Iain Brown Douglas
wrote:
> On Tue, 2015-05-19 at 11:39 -0300, Gonzalo Odiard wrote:
>> Iain, Sean, Sam,
>>
>>
>> _Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
>>
> Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
>
I've just spent two hours manually providing updates.
>>>
>>> _Please_consolidate_the_changes_before_send_to_Peter_.
>>>
>> Thanks, Gonzalo, is good advice.
>>
>
> I've just spent two hours manually providing updates. It will be live
> on staging shortly.
>
> Please provide any further updates against that.
Right the new updated content is live on st
Thanks Peter, I was watching that too.
If I understand correctly switching/changing the sections or adding an
Activity is beyond tweaks? while text changes are tweaks.
I'm quite happy with it, even though there are lots of changes we suggested
which aren't in.
I feel the only tweak still to make
On Wed, May 20, 2015 at 2:52 PM, Sean DALY wrote:
> Thanks Peter, I was watching that too.
>
> If I understand correctly switching/changing the sections or adding an
> Activity is beyond tweaks? while text changes are tweaks.
We need to stop somewhere and say "Yes, this is good enough" and I
real
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