[alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of the IETF. Title : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps Authors : Wendy Roome Sabine Randriamasy Y. Richard Yang Jingxuan Jensen Zhang Kai Gao Filename: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt Pages : 57 Date: 2020-11-26 Abstract: This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" to generic types of entities, and by presenting those properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base ALTO protocol. The protocol is extended in two major directions. First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on specific endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions introduce additional features allowing entities and property values to be specific to a given information resource. This is made possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property types. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
[alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt
Dear Vijay, Jan and Qin The new version 15 below fully addresses the review comments and now includes a "navigation table" listing the new features and the section describing them. This table stressed the need to change some section titles for more coherency. Additionally, upon discussions with Qin, Wendy and co-authors, the document title has now been changed to "ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps". The document section titles and text have been updated to harmonize with the document title. Other minor updates have been added to further address the need for clarification reflected in the reviews. The updates done on v14 to produce v15 are listed in the attached text file "v15-updates-2611.txt". We feel the document is now ready for WG chair review and look forward to getting review feedback. Thanks, Sabine, Jensen, Richard, Kai -Original Message- From: alto On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org Sent: Thursday, November 26, 2020 8:15 PM To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org Cc: alto@ietf.org Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of the IETF. Title : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps Authors : Wendy Roome Sabine Randriamasy Y. Richard Yang Jingxuan Jensen Zhang Kai Gao Filename: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt Pages : 57 Date: 2020-11-26 Abstract: This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" to generic types of entities, and by presenting those properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base ALTO protocol. The protocol is extended in two major directions. First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on specific endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions introduce additional features allowing entities and property values to be specific to a given information resource. This is made possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property types. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto --- UPDATES --- -- Document title: changed ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps Can also be ALTO Entity Property Maps for more simplicity Harmonized Section titles and text with new document title. -- Terminology Section 2. Terminology added: This document uses the following terms and abbreviations, that will be further defined in the document. While this document introduces the feature "entity property map", it will use both the term "property map" and "entity property map" to refer to this feature. added: EPM -- "feature navigation table" and related text 3. Basic Features of the Unified Property Extension has a new last paragraph mentioning the section (Annex A) providing the navigation table (4) The Entity Property Maps extension described in this document introduces a number of features that are summarized in , where lists the features and references the sections in this document that give a high-level and normative description thereof. Annex A: table is as follows (with real xrefs) Entity 3.1 5.1.3 Entity domain (ED) 3.2 ED type 3.2.1 5.1.1 ED name 3.2.2 5.1.2 Entity property (EP) type 3.3 5.2, 5.2.1, 5.2.2, 5.2.3, Entity property map 3.4 7, 8 resource-specific ED name 4.2 5.1.2, 5.1.2.1 resource-specific EP value 4.3 5.2.3 defining information resource 4.6,12.2.2, 4.7 12.3 -- Errors and warnings Abstract: removed [references] and replaced by text Added text of e-mail sent to Wendy, Qin a
Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt
Dear Sabine: thanks. I have the draft on my list of review items for next week. Will get back to you. Thanks. On Thu, Nov 26, 2020, 1:31 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) wrote: > Dear Vijay, Jan and Qin > > The new version 15 below fully addresses the review comments and now > includes a "navigation table" listing the new features and the section > describing them. This table stressed the need to change some section titles > for more coherency. > Additionally, upon discussions with Qin, Wendy and co-authors, the > document title has now been changed to "ALTO extension: Entity Property > Maps". > The document section titles and text have been updated to harmonize with > the document title. > Other minor updates have been added to further address the need for > clarification reflected in the reviews. > > The updates done on v14 to produce v15 are listed in the attached text > file "v15-updates-2611.txt". > > We feel the document is now ready for WG chair review and look forward to > getting review feedback. > > Thanks, > Sabine, Jensen, Richard, Kai > > -Original Message- > From: alto On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org > Sent: Thursday, November 26, 2020 8:15 PM > To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org > Cc: alto@ietf.org > Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG > of the IETF. > > Title : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps > Authors : Wendy Roome > Sabine Randriamasy > Y. Richard Yang > Jingxuan Jensen Zhang > Kai Gao > Filename: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15.txt > Pages : 57 > Date: 2020-11-26 > > Abstract: >This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization >(ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" >to generic types of entities, and by presenting those properties as >maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base ALTO protocol. >The protocol is extended in two major directions. First, from >endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering a wider and >extensible set of objects; second, from properties on specific >endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions introduce >additional features allowing entities and property values to be >specific to a given information resource. This is made possible by a >generic and flexible design of entity and property types. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ > > There are also htmlized versions available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at > tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > ___ > alto mailing list > alto@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
