Re: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

2021-01-12 Thread kaigao
Hi Vijay,

Happy New Year!

No problem at all. We will wait for the chair review and submit a new version 
based on that.

Thanks!

Best,
Kai

2021-01-12 22:33:33"Vijay Gurbani" wrote:

Dear Kai: Happy new year.


I am in the process of doing a chair review of path-vector and unified-props.  
My suggestion is that the nits can be addressed after I post my chair review on 
the mailing list.
I am reviewing unified-props this week, so I will get to path-vector next week.
Thanks,
- vijay



On Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 5:39 AM  wrote:




Hi Vijay,




How do you do? We have fixed most of the IDNits errors/warnings with a new 
revision -14. The remaining warnings are:




1. IDNits identifes [TBD] as references but we are using them in examples as 
placeholders for content length values.

2. IDNits thinks the version of [I-D.yang-alto-deliver-functions-over-networks] 
is -00 but the latest version as we used in the draft is -01.




How do you suggest we proceed here? Do you think we can submit -14 right now? 
Or we should wait for your review on -13?




Thanks!




Best,

Kai




-Original Messages-
From:kai...@scu.edu.cn
Sent Time:2021-01-12 17:46:53 (Tuesday)
To: "Qin Wu" 
Cc: "IETF ALTO" 
Subject: Re: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

Hi Qin,

Thanks for the notification! I will fix the IDNits errors as soon as possible.

Best,
Kai

2021-01-12 09:45:08"Qin Wu" wrote:

Hi, authors of path-vector:

I haven’t seen you addressed IDnits errors raised by Vijay below:

https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-13.txt

Please reply to Vijay and confirm whether there are anything missing or open 
issues which haven’t been closed.

 

-Qin (With chair hat on)

发件人: alto [mailto:alto-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Vijay Gurbani
发送时间: 2020年12月2日 1:36
收件人: IETF ALTO 
主题: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

 

All: I have started the shepherd review of path-vector  The review is below.

The token is with me to do a chair/shepherd review of the draft.  With the 
semester coming to a close and grading to do, etc., I have reserved the week 
starting Dec-16 to do the shepherd review of the draft.

 

In the meantime, please go through the draft shepherd writeup and let me know 
if I have erred anywhere.

 

Thanks,

 

- vijay

-

Shepherd writeup for draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-13

1. Summary.

The document shepherd is Vijay K. Gurbani, and the responsible area director is 
Martin Duke.

The document is a Standards Track document, targeted as a Proposed Standard.  
The WG has chosen the requested publication type since this draft extends the 
base ALTO protocol in a normative manner.  Specifically, the document seeks to 
extend the base ALTO protocol (RFC 7285) to provide the concept of "Abstract 
Network Elements" (ANE).  ANEs are an abstraction of physical network 
components --- routers, etc. --- that handle (switch) packets.  An application 
whose performance may be impacted by a particular traversal path in the network 
may wish to consult the ANEs to determine an optimized path to the destination.

This draft is a major conceptual advance in the abstractions provided by the 
base ALTO protocol.

2. Review and consensus.
This work is mature.  It started off as an individual submission in March 2015, 
and was adopted as a WG deliverable in May 2017.  A detailed review of this 
draft was provided early on by Sabine Randriamasy [1,2,3] shortly after it was 
adopted.  Version -04 was further reviewed by Danny Perez [4] and Qiao Xiang 
[5] in 2018, and the work progressed appreciably between 2018 and 2019, 
resulting in the release of -09 in November 2019.

A WGLC was initiated on Sep-28-2020, and a review was provided by Qiao Xiang 
[6] and Luis Contreras [7] on version -11.  Version -12 included the comments 
from Qiao and Luis, with version -13 following with some minor revisions.

Earlier versions of path-vector have been implemented (without the integration 
of unified-props); the implementation was used in a super computing conference 
demonstration for OpenFlow-based networks [8].  The latest version of 
path-vector is being implemented and will be open-sourced on GitHub [9].

The shepherd has an action item to review version -13.

3. Intellectual property
All of the authors have confirmed with the shephered that they are not aware of 
any IPR filed with respect to the draft.

4. Other points
IDNits reports 1 error, 7 warnings, and 2 comments.

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/IQ0WwgWewFKJkvzZSIQRhkiN-hc/
[2] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/4wa_kXE4GUrigZ33TBCVVuwBuiw/
[3] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/GGroJgfL5XGuH1ydWOLmISCPMKY/
[4] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/HSGkZ2o4JvneiiYiVSGcCZjDVSQ/
[5] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/qnIBXzFEiYxMDm9kvHLH53qbn_Y/
[6] https://mailarchive.ietf.or

Re: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

2021-01-12 Thread Vijay Gurbani
Dear Kai: Happy new year.

I am in the process of doing a chair review of path-vector and
unified-props.  My suggestion is that the nits can be addressed after I
post my chair review on the mailing list.
I am reviewing unified-props this week, so I will get to path-vector next
week.
Thanks,
- vijay

On Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 5:39 AM  wrote:

>
> Hi Vijay,
>
>
> How do you do? We have fixed most of the IDNits errors/warnings with a new
> revision -14. The remaining warnings are:
>
>
> 1. IDNits identifes [TBD] as references but we are using them in examples
> as placeholders for content length values.
>
> 2. IDNits thinks the version of
> [I-D.yang-alto-deliver-functions-over-networks] is -00 but the latest
> version as we used in the draft is -01.
>
>
> How do you suggest we proceed here? Do you think we can submit -14 right
> now? Or we should wait for your review on -13?
>
>
> Thanks!
>
>
> Best,
>
> Kai
>
>
> -Original Messages-
> *From:*kai...@scu.edu.cn
> *Sent Time:*2021-01-12 17:46:53 (Tuesday)
> *To:* "Qin Wu" 
> *Cc:* "IETF ALTO" 
> *Subject:* Re: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)
>
> Hi Qin,
>
>
> Thanks for the notification! I will fix the IDNits errors as soon as possible.
>
> Best,
> Kai
>
> 2021-01-12 09:45:08"Qin Wu" wrote:
>
> Hi, authors of path-vector:
>
> I haven’t seen you addressed IDnits errors raised by Vijay below:
>
>
> https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-13.txt
>
> Please reply to Vijay and confirm whether there are anything missing or
> open issues which haven’t been closed.
>
>
>
> -Qin (With chair hat on)
>
> *发件人:* alto [mailto:alto-boun...@ietf.org] *代表 *Vijay Gurbani
> *发送时间:* 2020年12月2日 1:36
> *收件人:* IETF ALTO 
> *主题:* [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)
>
>
>
> All: I have started the shepherd review of path-vector  The review is
> below.
>
> The token is with me to do a chair/shepherd review of the draft.  With the
> semester coming to a close and grading to do, etc., I have reserved the
> week starting Dec-16 to do the shepherd review of the draft.
>
>
>
> In the meantime, please go through the draft shepherd writeup and let me
> know if I have erred anywhere.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
>
>
> - vijay
>
>
> -
>
> Shepherd writeup for draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-13
>
> 1. Summary.
>
> The document shepherd is Vijay K. Gurbani, and the responsible area
> director is Martin Duke.
>
> The document is a Standards Track document, targeted as a Proposed
> Standard.  The WG has chosen the requested publication type since this
> draft extends the base ALTO protocol in a normative manner.  Specifically,
> the document seeks to extend the base ALTO protocol (RFC 7285) to provide
> the concept of "Abstract Network Elements" (ANE).  ANEs are an abstraction
> of physical network components --- routers, etc. --- that handle (switch)
> packets.  An application whose performance may be impacted by a particular
> traversal path in the network may wish to consult the ANEs to determine an
> optimized path to the destination.
>
> This draft is a major conceptual advance in the abstractions provided by
> the base ALTO protocol.
>
> 2. Review and consensus.
> This work is mature.  It started off as an individual submission in March
> 2015, and was adopted as a WG deliverable in May 2017.  A detailed review
> of this draft was provided early on by Sabine Randriamasy [1,2,3] shortly
> after it was adopted.  Version -04 was further reviewed by Danny Perez [4]
> and Qiao Xiang [5] in 2018, and the work progressed appreciably between
> 2018 and 2019, resulting in the release of -09 in November 2019.
>
> A WGLC was initiated on Sep-28-2020, and a review was provided by Qiao
> Xiang [6] and Luis Contreras [7] on version -11.  Version -12 included the
> comments from Qiao and Luis, with version -13 following with some minor
> revisions.
>
> Earlier versions of path-vector have been implemented (without the
> integration of unified-props); the implementation was used in a super
> computing conference demonstration for OpenFlow-based networks [8].  The
> latest version of path-vector is being implemented and will be open-sourced
> on GitHub [9].
>
> The shepherd has an action item to review version -13.
>
> 3. Intellectual property
> All of the authors have confirmed with the shephered that they are not
> aware of any IPR filed with respect to the draft.
>
> 4. Other points
> IDNits reports 1 error, 7 warnings, and 2 comments.
>
> [1]
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/IQ0WwgWewFKJkvzZSIQRhkiN-hc/
> [2]
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/4wa_kXE4GUrigZ33TBCVVuwBuiw/
> [3]
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/GGroJgfL5XGuH1ydWOLmISCPMKY/
> [4]
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/HSGkZ2o4JvneiiYiVSGcCZjDVSQ/
> [5]
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/qnIBXzFEiYxMDm9kvHLH53qbn_Y/
> [6]
> 

Re: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

2021-01-12 Thread kaigao



Hi Vijay,




How do you do? We have fixed most of the IDNits errors/warnings with a new 
revision -14. The remaining warnings are:




1. IDNits identifes [TBD] as references but we are using them in examples as 
placeholders for content length values.

2. IDNits thinks the version of [I-D.yang-alto-deliver-functions-over-networks] 
is -00 but the latest version as we used in the draft is -01.




How do you suggest we proceed here? Do you think we can submit -14 right now? 
Or we should wait for your review on -13?




Thanks!




Best,

Kai




-Original Messages-
From:kai...@scu.edu.cn
Sent Time:2021-01-12 17:46:53 (Tuesday)
To: "Qin Wu" 
Cc: "IETF ALTO" 
Subject: Re: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

Hi Qin,

Thanks for the notification! I will fix the IDNits errors as soon as possible.

Best,
Kai

2021-01-12 09:45:08"Qin Wu" wrote:

Hi, authors of path-vector:

I haven’t seen you addressed IDnits errors raised by Vijay below:

https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-13.txt

Please reply to Vijay and confirm whether there are anything missing or open 
issues which haven’t been closed.

 

-Qin (With chair hat on)

发件人: alto [mailto:alto-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Vijay Gurbani
发送时间: 2020年12月2日 1:36
收件人: IETF ALTO 
主题: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

 

All: I have started the shepherd review of path-vector  The review is below.

The token is with me to do a chair/shepherd review of the draft.  With the 
semester coming to a close and grading to do, etc., I have reserved the week 
starting Dec-16 to do the shepherd review of the draft.

 

In the meantime, please go through the draft shepherd writeup and let me know 
if I have erred anywhere.

 

Thanks,

 

- vijay

-

Shepherd writeup for draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-13

1. Summary.

The document shepherd is Vijay K. Gurbani, and the responsible area director is 
Martin Duke.

The document is a Standards Track document, targeted as a Proposed Standard.  
The WG has chosen the requested publication type since this draft extends the 
base ALTO protocol in a normative manner.  Specifically, the document seeks to 
extend the base ALTO protocol (RFC 7285) to provide the concept of "Abstract 
Network Elements" (ANE).  ANEs are an abstraction of physical network 
components --- routers, etc. --- that handle (switch) packets.  An application 
whose performance may be impacted by a particular traversal path in the network 
may wish to consult the ANEs to determine an optimized path to the destination.

This draft is a major conceptual advance in the abstractions provided by the 
base ALTO protocol.

2. Review and consensus.
This work is mature.  It started off as an individual submission in March 2015, 
and was adopted as a WG deliverable in May 2017.  A detailed review of this 
draft was provided early on by Sabine Randriamasy [1,2,3] shortly after it was 
adopted.  Version -04 was further reviewed by Danny Perez [4] and Qiao Xiang 
[5] in 2018, and the work progressed appreciably between 2018 and 2019, 
resulting in the release of -09 in November 2019.

A WGLC was initiated on Sep-28-2020, and a review was provided by Qiao Xiang 
[6] and Luis Contreras [7] on version -11.  Version -12 included the comments 
from Qiao and Luis, with version -13 following with some minor revisions.

Earlier versions of path-vector have been implemented (without the integration 
of unified-props); the implementation was used in a super computing conference 
demonstration for OpenFlow-based networks [8].  The latest version of 
path-vector is being implemented and will be open-sourced on GitHub [9].

The shepherd has an action item to review version -13.

3. Intellectual property
All of the authors have confirmed with the shephered that they are not aware of 
any IPR filed with respect to the draft.

4. Other points
IDNits reports 1 error, 7 warnings, and 2 comments.

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/IQ0WwgWewFKJkvzZSIQRhkiN-hc/
[2] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/4wa_kXE4GUrigZ33TBCVVuwBuiw/
[3] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/GGroJgfL5XGuH1ydWOLmISCPMKY/
[4] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/HSGkZ2o4JvneiiYiVSGcCZjDVSQ/
[5] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/qnIBXzFEiYxMDm9kvHLH53qbn_Y/
[6] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/uwFNjekGcc3zMdSKleHU7eIdsW4/
[7] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/D5jkRGws2c75paw6yP8_5_40ViY/
[8] https://github.com/openalto/mercator-setup
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Re: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

2021-01-12 Thread kaigao
Hi Qin,

Thanks for the notification! I will fix the IDNits errors as soon as possible.

Best,
Kai

2021-01-12 09:45:08"Qin Wu" wrote:

Hi, authors of path-vector:

I haven’t seen you addressed IDnits errors raised by Vijay below:

https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-13.txt

Please reply to Vijay and confirm whether there are anything missing or open 
issues which haven’t been closed.

 

-Qin (With chair hat on)

发件人: alto [mailto:alto-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Vijay Gurbani
发送时间: 2020年12月2日 1:36
收件人: IETF ALTO 
主题: [alto] Shepherd writeup for path-vector (draft)

 

All: I have started the shepherd review of path-vector  The review is below.

The token is with me to do a chair/shepherd review of the draft.  With the 
semester coming to a close and grading to do, etc., I have reserved the week 
starting Dec-16 to do the shepherd review of the draft.

 

In the meantime, please go through the draft shepherd writeup and let me know 
if I have erred anywhere.

 

Thanks,

 

- vijay

-

Shepherd writeup for draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-13

1. Summary.

The document shepherd is Vijay K. Gurbani, and the responsible area director is 
Martin Duke.

The document is a Standards Track document, targeted as a Proposed Standard.  
The WG has chosen the requested publication type since this draft extends the 
base ALTO protocol in a normative manner.  Specifically, the document seeks to 
extend the base ALTO protocol (RFC 7285) to provide the concept of "Abstract 
Network Elements" (ANE).  ANEs are an abstraction of physical network 
components --- routers, etc. --- that handle (switch) packets.  An application 
whose performance may be impacted by a particular traversal path in the network 
may wish to consult the ANEs to determine an optimized path to the destination.

This draft is a major conceptual advance in the abstractions provided by the 
base ALTO protocol.

2. Review and consensus.
This work is mature.  It started off as an individual submission in March 2015, 
and was adopted as a WG deliverable in May 2017.  A detailed review of this 
draft was provided early on by Sabine Randriamasy [1,2,3] shortly after it was 
adopted.  Version -04 was further reviewed by Danny Perez [4] and Qiao Xiang 
[5] in 2018, and the work progressed appreciably between 2018 and 2019, 
resulting in the release of -09 in November 2019.

A WGLC was initiated on Sep-28-2020, and a review was provided by Qiao Xiang 
[6] and Luis Contreras [7] on version -11.  Version -12 included the comments 
from Qiao and Luis, with version -13 following with some minor revisions.

Earlier versions of path-vector have been implemented (without the integration 
of unified-props); the implementation was used in a super computing conference 
demonstration for OpenFlow-based networks [8].  The latest version of 
path-vector is being implemented and will be open-sourced on GitHub [9].

The shepherd has an action item to review version -13.

3. Intellectual property
All of the authors have confirmed with the shephered that they are not aware of 
any IPR filed with respect to the draft.

4. Other points
IDNits reports 1 error, 7 warnings, and 2 comments.

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/IQ0WwgWewFKJkvzZSIQRhkiN-hc/
[2] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/4wa_kXE4GUrigZ33TBCVVuwBuiw/
[3] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/GGroJgfL5XGuH1ydWOLmISCPMKY/
[4] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/HSGkZ2o4JvneiiYiVSGcCZjDVSQ/
[5] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/qnIBXzFEiYxMDm9kvHLH53qbn_Y/
[6] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/uwFNjekGcc3zMdSKleHU7eIdsW4/
[7] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/D5jkRGws2c75paw6yP8_5_40ViY/
[8] https://github.com/openalto/mercator-setup
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Re: [alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-12

2021-01-12 Thread Qin Wu
Jensen:
My impression,  is an optional item in the ANBF, therefore the metric 
identifier can be used without  as suffix.
I think your proposed change makes sense to me.

-Qin
发件人: Jensen Zhang [mailto:jingxuan.n.zh...@gmail.com]
发送时间: 2021年1月12日 15:36
收件人: Qin Wu 
抄送: IETF ALTO ; Y. Richard Yang ; Kai Gao 

主题: Re: [alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-12

Hi Qin,

I agree with you that the constraints checking should rely on the 
implementation. I'm OK that it is not in the scope of this document.

For other comments, I have checked v-13. I think most of them have been 
addressed, except for the following one.

Section 2.2., paragraph 16:

>If a metric has no  (and hence no - as well), the metric MUST

  recommend adding " surrounding -, or using dash character instead;
  if possible, giving the precise BNF grammar will be better, as I
  see some metrics names also include the dash character ("-").
>be considered as the 50 percentile (median).  Since this scheme is
>common for all metrics defined in this document, below we only
>specify the base identifier.

Although I can understand this sentence, I still think it should be better 
clarified.
I would suggest giving the BNF grammar at the beginning of this section, e.g.,


   ... Hence, each performance metric's identifier

   should indicate the statistic (i.e., an aggregation operation), to

   become



   ::=  [ '-'  ]



   where  MUST be one of the following:

And changing the last paragraph of the section to:


   If '-'  is not present in , the metric MUST

   be considered as the 50 percentile (median).

Thanks,
Jensen


On Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 2:22 PM Qin Wu 
mailto:bill...@huawei.com>> wrote:
Hi, Jensen:
Speak as individual, My answer to your following question is false as well, 
even based on RFC7285, defining hopecount as float point value seem also weird.
I think we can rely on implementation or some automation tools for constraints 
checking, but it is not scope of this document.
For other comments, I think Richard have addressed in v-13. Please double check 
it. Thanks

-Qin
[alto] Review for draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-12

Jensen Zhang mailto:jingxuan.n.zh...@gmail.com>> 
Tue, 13 October 2020 04:17 UTCShow 
header
Dear ALTOers and authors of draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-12,

Below is my review for draft-ietf-alto-performance-metrics-12.

Best regards,
Jensen

==
General issue:

The document is well written. I only have one question about the design
part:

the base ALTO protocol only uses the cost-mode to infer the value format,
e.g., "numerical" infers the cost value MUST be a floating-point value; but
this document requires different value formats for different cost-metrics,
e.g., "delay-ow" requires the non-negative floating-point value, and
"hopcount" requires the non-negative integer value. But based on
Sec 11.3.2.3 of RFC7285, in the "constraints" field, "ALTO servers SHOULD
use at least IEEE 754 double-precision floating point [IEEE.754.2008] to
store the cost value". I wonder if a test constraint expression like "eq
3.1" for the cost-metric "hopcount" is valid. Should the ALTO server reject
such a request? According to RFC7285, it should be valid. But according to
this document, it is clearly always false.

==

Nits and writing suggestions:

Section 1., paragraph 5:

>The purpose of this document is to ensure proper usage of the
>performance metrics defined in Table 1; it does not claim novelty of
>the metrics.  The Origin column of Table 1 gives the RFC which
>defines each metric.

  Origin -> Origin Example (to be consistent with the table)
>We can rough classify the performance metrics into two categories:
>those derived from the performance of individual packets (i.e., one-
>way delay, round-trip delay, delay variation, hop count, and loss
>rate), and those related with bandwidth (TCP throughput, residue
>bandwidth and max reservable bandwidth).  These two categories are
>defined in Section 3 and Section 4 respectively.  Note that all
>metrics except round trip delay are unidirectional.  Hence, a client
>will need to query both directions if needed.


Section 2., paragraph 1:

>When defining the metrics in Table 1, this document considers the
>guidelines specified in [RFC6390], which requires fine-grained
>specification of (i) Metric Name, (ii) Metric Description, (iii)
>Method of Measurement or Calculation, (iv) Units of Measurement, (v)
>Measurement Points, and (vi) Measurement Timing.  In particular, for
>each metric, this document defines (i) Metric Name, (ii) Metric
>Description, and (iv) Units of Measurement.  The Measurement Points
>are always specified by the specific ALTO services; for example,
>endpoint cost service is between

Re: [alto] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt

2021-01-12 Thread Jensen Zhang
Hi Qin,

Thanks for pointing that out. We have fixed them in version -16.

Cheers,
Jensen


On Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 3:04 PM Qin Wu  wrote:

> Hi, Jensen:
>
> IDnits tool shows two errors:
>
>
> https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
>
>   ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 7159 (Obsoleted by RFC 8259)
>
>   ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC8008], [RFC7336],
>
>  [RFC6707]), which it shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight
>
>  textual mentions of the documents in question.
>
>
>
> Please fix them.
>
>
>
> -Qin
>
> *发件人:* alto [mailto:alto-boun...@ietf.org] *代表 *Jensen Zhang
> *发送时间:* 2021年1月12日 14:36
> *收件人:* IETF ALTO 
> *主题:* [alto] Fwd: I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
>
>
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> Hi all,
>
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>
> We just submitted version -15 of the ALTO CDNI document to address the
> following issues:
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> - Replaced the deprecated term "unified properties" with "entity property
> map" to be consistent with draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15
>
> - Moved I-D.ietf-alto-unified-props-new into the normative references
> (suggested by Qin [1])
>
>
>
> [1]
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/clLDN-B7nDlIKN3Tq4qxug83tic/
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>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Jensen
>
>
>
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> Date: Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 2:16 PM
> Subject: [alto] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
> To: 
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG
> of the IETF.
>
> Title   : Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI)
> Request Routing: CDNI Footprint and Capabilities Advertisement using ALTO
> Authors : Jan Seedorf
>   Y.R. Yang
>   Kevin J. Ma
>   Jon Peterson
>   Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
> Filename: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
> Pages   : 41
> Date: 2021-01-11
>
> Abstract:
>The Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) framework
>[RFC6707] defines a set of protocols to interconnect CDNs, to achieve
>multiple goals such as extending the reach of a given CDN to areas
>that are not covered by that particular CDN.  One component that is
>needed to achieve the goal of CDNI described in [RFC7336] is the CDNI
>Request Routing Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface
>(FCI).  [RFC8008] defines precisely the semantics of FCI and provides
>guidelines on the FCI protocol, but the exact protocol is explicitly
>outside the scope of that document.  This document defines an FCI
>protocol using the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO)
>protocol, following the guidelines defined in [RFC8008].
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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[alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-16.txt

2021-01-12 Thread internet-drafts


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of 
the IETF.

Title   : Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) 
Request Routing: CDNI Footprint and Capabilities Advertisement using ALTO
Authors : Jan Seedorf
  Y.R. Yang
  Kevin J. Ma
  Jon Peterson
  Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
Filename: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-16.txt
Pages   : 41
Date: 2021-01-12

Abstract:
   The Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) framework
   defines a set of protocols to interconnect CDNs, to achieve multiple
   goals such as extending the reach of a given CDN to areas that are
   not covered by that particular CDN.  One component that is needed to
   achieve the goal of CDNI described in CDNI framework is the CDNI
   Request Routing Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface
   (FCI).  RFC 8008 defines precisely the semantics of FCI and provides
   guidelines on the FCI protocol, but the exact protocol is explicitly
   outside the scope of that document.  This document defines an FCI
   protocol using the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO)
   protocol, following the guidelines defined in RFC 8008.



The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-16
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-16

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-16


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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