Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt
Hi Vijay,
Thanks again for your revision of version 15.
I still owe to you and the WG an inline response by Jensen and myself to your
comments.
For the moment, I have the attached text file that integrates them with your
comments.
Most of your comments were hopefully correctly addressed and we still have
thoughts on comments regarding sections:
4.7.1, 4.4.3, 9.3, 11.
I will send an “integrated” response tomorrow to the list.
Thanks,
Sabine
From: Vijay Gurbani
Sent: Saturday, February 27, 2021 9:18 PM
To: Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)
Cc: alto@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt
Dear Sabine: Thank you. I will look over the changes and move the draft ahead.
I plan to do so next week.
- vijay
On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 6:49 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay)
mailto:sabine.randriam...@nokia-bell-labs.com>>
wrote:
Dear all,
This version 16 addresses most of Vijay's review comments part 1 and 2.
We will come back in a few days with details on how the comments have been
addressed.
Thanks,
Sabine
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>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of
>the
>IETF.
>
>Title : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps
>Authors : Wendy Roome
> Sabine Randriamasy
> Y. Richard Yang
> Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
> Kai Gao
> Filename: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt
> Pages : 57
> Date: 2021-02-22
>
>Abstract:
> This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
> (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties"
> as applied to endpoints as defined by IP addresses to endpoints
> defined by a wider set of objects. Further, these properties are
> presented as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base
> ALTO protocol. The protocol is extended in two major directions.
> First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering
> a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on
> specific endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions
> introduce additional features allowing entities and property values
> to be specific to a given information resource. This is made
> possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property
> types.
>
>
>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/
>
>There are also htmlized versions available at:
>https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16
>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16
>
>A diff from the previous version is available at:
>https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16
>
>
>Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
>until the htmlized version and diff are available at
>tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org>.
>
>Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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=== Chair review of unified-props (Part 1 of 2) ===
Major:
- Abstract: "...by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" to generic
type of entities..." ==> Note that the antecedent ("endpoint properties") and
the consequent ("type of entities") do not match. Perhaps better to say: "...by
generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" as applied to endpoints
defined by IP addresses to endpoints a wider set of objects..."
More concretely:
OLD:
This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
(ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties"
to generic types of entities, and by presenting those properties as
maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base ALTO protocol.
NEW:
This
Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt
Hi Vijay, Thanks a lot. In the meantime, we will provide you with inline responses to your review and considerations on review comments that need further discussions. Thanks, Sabine From: Vijay Gurbani Sent: Saturday, February 27, 2021 9:18 PM To: Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) Cc: alto@ietf.org Subject: Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt Dear Sabine: Thank you. I will look over the changes and move the draft ahead. I plan to do so next week. - vijay On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 6:49 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) mailto:sabine.randriam...@nokia-bell-labs.com>> wrote: Dear all, This version 16 addresses most of Vijay's review comments part 1 and 2. We will come back in a few days with details on how the comments have been addressed. Thanks, Sabine >-Original Message- >From: alto mailto:alto-boun...@ietf.org>> On Behalf Of >internet-dra...@ietf.org<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> >Sent: Tuesday, February 23, 2021 1:01 AM >To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org<mailto:i-d-annou...@ietf.org> >Cc: alto@ietf.org<mailto:alto@ietf.org> >Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt > > >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. >This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of >the >IETF. > >Title : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps >Authors : Wendy Roome > Sabine Randriamasy > Y. Richard Yang > Jingxuan Jensen Zhang > Kai Gao > Filename: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt > Pages : 57 > Date: 2021-02-22 > >Abstract: > This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" > as applied to endpoints as defined by IP addresses to endpoints > defined by a wider set of objects. Further, these properties are > presented as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base > ALTO protocol. The protocol is extended in two major directions. > First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering > a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on > specific endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions > introduce additional features allowing entities and property values > to be specific to a given information resource. This is made > possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property > types. > > >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ > >There are also htmlized versions available at: >https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 > >A diff from the previous version is available at: >https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 > > >Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission >until the htmlized version and diff are available at >tools.ietf.org<http://tools.ietf.org>. > >Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > >___ >alto mailing list >alto@ietf.org<mailto:alto@ietf.org> >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org<mailto:alto@ietf.org> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt
Dear Sabine: Thank you. I will look over the changes and move the draft ahead. I plan to do so next week. - vijay On Mon, Feb 22, 2021 at 6:49 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Paris-Saclay) wrote: > Dear all, > > This version 16 addresses most of Vijay's review comments part 1 and 2. > We will come back in a few days with details on how the comments have been > addressed. > Thanks, > Sabine > > >-Original Message- > >From: alto On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org > >Sent: Tuesday, February 23, 2021 1:01 AM > >To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org > >Cc: alto@ietf.org > >Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt > > > > > >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > >This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > WG of the > >IETF. > > > >Title : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps > >Authors : Wendy Roome > > Sabine Randriamasy > > Y. Richard Yang > > Jingxuan Jensen Zhang > > Kai Gao > > Filename: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt > > Pages : 57 > > Date: 2021-02-22 > > > >Abstract: > > This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > > (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" > > as applied to endpoints as defined by IP addresses to endpoints > > defined by a wider set of objects. Further, these properties are > > presented as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base > > ALTO protocol. The protocol is extended in two major directions. > > First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering > > a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on > > specific endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions > > introduce additional features allowing entities and property values > > to be specific to a given information resource. This is made > > possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property > > types. > > > > > >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ > > > >There are also htmlized versions available at: > >https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 > > > >A diff from the previous version is available at: > >https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 > > > > > >Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > >until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > > >Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > >ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > > > > >___ > >alto mailing list > >alto@ietf.org > >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > > ___ > alto mailing list > alto@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
Re: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt
Dear all, This version 16 addresses most of Vijay's review comments part 1 and 2. We will come back in a few days with details on how the comments have been addressed. Thanks, Sabine >-Original Message- >From: alto On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org >Sent: Tuesday, February 23, 2021 1:01 AM >To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org >Cc: alto@ietf.org >Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt > > >A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. >This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of >the >IETF. > >Title : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps >Authors : Wendy Roome > Sabine Randriamasy > Y. Richard Yang > Jingxuan Jensen Zhang > Kai Gao > Filename: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt > Pages : 57 > Date: 2021-02-22 > >Abstract: > This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization > (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" > as applied to endpoints as defined by IP addresses to endpoints > defined by a wider set of objects. Further, these properties are > presented as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base > ALTO protocol. The protocol is extended in two major directions. > First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering > a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on > specific endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions > introduce additional features allowing entities and property values > to be specific to a given information resource. This is made > possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property > types. > > >The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ > >There are also htmlized versions available at: >https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 >https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 > >A diff from the previous version is available at: >https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 > > >Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission >until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > >Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > >___ >alto mailing list >alto@ietf.org >https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
[alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of the IETF. Title : ALTO extension: Entity Property Maps Authors : Wendy Roome Sabine Randriamasy Y. Richard Yang Jingxuan Jensen Zhang Kai Gao Filename: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16.txt Pages : 57 Date: 2021-02-22 Abstract: This document extends the base Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO) Protocol by generalizing the concept of "endpoint properties" as applied to endpoints as defined by IP addresses to endpoints defined by a wider set of objects. Further, these properties are presented as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in the base ALTO protocol. The protocol is extended in two major directions. First, from endpoints restricted to IP addresses to entities covering a wider and extensible set of objects; second, from properties on specific endpoints to entire entity property maps. These extensions introduce additional features allowing entities and property values to be specific to a given information resource. This is made possible by a generic and flexible design of entity and property types. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/ There are also htmlized versions available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-16 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
