Re: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-new-transport : Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs

[kaigao]

Hi Adrian,




Thanks for the review. We will fix the unused reference issue.




Best,

Kai



-Original Messages-
From:"Adrian Farrel" 
Sent Time:2023-05-22 06:09:42 (Monday)
To: "'Jordi Ros Giralt'" , alto@ietf.org
Cc:
Subject: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-new-transport : Call for volunteers to review 
2nd WGLC for ALTO docs



Hi Jordi / all,

 

I reviewed this draft at revision -05 and had quite a pile of comments. Looking 
at -08, I think all my comments were addressed.

 

My relatively quick read through of the current revision found no issues and so 
I think the document is now ready to move forward.

 

Note that idnits observes that RFC 7971 is an unused reference.

 

Cheers,

Adrian

 

From: alto  On Behalf Of Jordi Ros Giralt
Sent: 17 May 2023 06:41
To: alto@ietf.org
Subject: [alto] Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs

 

Hi ALTO WG:

 

As you know, we are in the process of issuing the 2nd WGLC for two of the ALTO 
drafts (New Transport and OAM). Thank you to all of you who have been working 
hard to help get these documents completed, including all the detailed feedback 
provided by reviewers during the first WGLC.

 

There is now a need (as mentioned by the chairs) to have as many eyes & 
volunteers review the docs to make sure they are in the best possible shape. I 
can volunteer to review both documents. Richard also volunteered, thank you 
Richard. We would like to suggest targeting two more volunteers. Could any of 
you help support this work?

 

We are targeting 22/05 to complete this new round of revisions, as that's the 
target day for the 2nd WGLC.

 

These are the docs:

 

- New Transport: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-new-transport/

- OAM: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/

 

Please feel free to forward this email if you know others (inside or ouside 
ALTO) who can help review the docs too.

 

As we are working to wrap up the current charter, this is very important work 
to ensure the quality of the documents produced by ALTO. Thank you for your 
collaboration.

 

Jordi, on behalf of ALTO

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[alto] draft-ietf-alto-new-transport : Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs

[Adrian Farrel]

Hi Jordi / all,

 

I reviewed this draft at revision -05 and had quite a pile of comments.
Looking at -08, I think all my comments were addressed.

 

My relatively quick read through of the current revision found no issues and
so I think the document is now ready to move forward.

 

Note that idnits observes that RFC 7971 is an unused reference.

 

Cheers,

Adrian

 

From: alto  On Behalf Of Jordi Ros Giralt
Sent: 17 May 2023 06:41
To: alto@ietf.org
Subject: [alto] Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs

 

Hi ALTO WG:

 

As you know, we are in the process of issuing the 2nd WGLC for two of the
ALTO drafts (New Transport and OAM). Thank you to all of you who have been
working hard to help get these documents completed, including all the
detailed feedback provided by reviewers during the first WGLC.

 

There is now a need (as mentioned by the chairs) to have as many eyes &
volunteers review the docs to make sure they are in the best possible shape.
I can volunteer to review both documents. Richard also volunteered, thank
you Richard. We would like to suggest targeting two more volunteers. Could
any of you help support this work?

 

We are targeting 22/05 to complete this new round of revisions, as that's
the target day for the 2nd WGLC.

 

These are the docs:

 

- New Transport:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-new-transport/

- OAM: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/

 

Please feel free to forward this email if you know others (inside or ouside
ALTO) who can help review the docs too.

 

As we are working to wrap up the current charter, this is very important
work to ensure the quality of the documents produced by ALTO. Thank you for
your collaboration.

 

Jordi, on behalf of ALTO

 

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