Re: [alto] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-06
Thanks for the clarification and for addressing my comment. The proposed change looks good to me. Regards, Dan On Thu, Apr 27, 2023 at 2:29 AM Jensen Zhang wrote: > Hi Dan, > > Thanks for your feedback. See my response inline. > > On Wed, Apr 26, 2023 at 3:25 PM Dan Romascanu wrote: > >> Hi Jensen, >> >> Thank you for your email and for addressing my comments. >> >> See in-line. >> >> Regards, >> >> Dan >> >> >> >> >> On Tue, Apr 25, 2023 at 4:01 PM Jensen Zhang >> wrote: >> >>> Hi Dan, >>> >>> Sorry for the delay. Many thanks for your review. Please see our >>> response inline below. >>> >>> On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 4:00 PM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker < >>> nore...@ietf.org> wrote: >>> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Has Nits Ready with Nits This document defines YANG data models for Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (OAM) & Management of ALTO. The operator can use these data models to set up an ALTO server, create, update and remove ALTO information resources, manage the access control, configure server discovery, and collect statistical data. I like this document. It is clearly written and very well structured. I liked the description of requirements, the information model corresponding to the requirements, and the extension example modules in the Appendices. These are all very useful for operators who need to understand and use the YANG modules. Understanding and using this document requires a good knowledge of ALTO. My review is focused on the design and data modelling issues relevant for operations and manageability. I did not perform a YANG review, I assume that YANG Doctors review is performed separately. This document is Ready with a couple of editorial comments. Editorial & Nits: 1. There are many more acronyms not included in Section 3 or expanded at first occurrence. Maybe the respective acronyms sections in the ALTO documents should be mentioned / referred >>> >>> Thanks for pointing out this issue. We have included all the acronyms >>> that occur in the document in Sec 3. You can check the changes in our early >>> edit [1]. >>> >>> [1]: >>> https://ietf-wg-alto.github.io/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang.html#name-acronyms-and-abbreviations >>> >>> But we are not sure if the acronyms that only occur in the YANG modules >>> should also be included. >>> >> >> I believe that the answer is yes. There is no other separate >> abbreviations section for the YANG modules. >> >> >> >>> >>> 2. In Section 5.3.1.2 > In practice, multiple ALTO servers can be deployed for scalability. That may require communication among different ALTO servers. The "ietf-alto" module does not contain any configuration for the communication between peer ALTO servers. Instead, it provides the configuration for how an ALTO server can be discovered by another ALTO server on demand (Figure 6). I understand that the communication between ALTO servers is out of scope. However, I do not understand how is the scalability requirement met. Is there / Will there be another YANG module to define this data model? Something else than YANG? Maybe this is described in another ALTO document that I did not find. >>> >>> The scalability requirement is not explicitly defined in this document. >>> It looks like a part of R1 but is not mandatory. >>> >>> And I am not quite sure what is the scalability requirement that you >>> mentioned here. There can be two kinds of scalability issues: >>> >>> 1. The scalability of a large number of network domains and elements. >>> This issue requires the deployment of multiple ALTO server instances in >>> different domains and communications among different ALTO servers in >>> different domains. WG is still discussing the related topic [2]. The >>> solution is not mature. So we consider it to be out of the scope of this >>> document. >>> >>> [2]: >>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/Hpay0QShfob_3LR7ERfpIjXvGI0/ >>> >>> 2. The scalability of a large number of client connections. i.e., the >>> load balance issue. This may need some autoscaling or load-balancing >>> configuration parameters. Is this what you want to add? >>> >> >> I was referring to the scalability issue mentioned in the document in the >> sentence 'In practice, multiple ALTO servers can be deployed for >> scalability.'. This seems to be related to issue #1 in your answer. If the >> solution is considered not mature at this stage, maybe you should mention >> just that in the document, to explain why it is out of scope. >> > > Thanks for your clarification. I think the "scalability" in the original > text may be ambiguous. We made the following change: > > OLD: > >In
Re: [alto] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-06
Hi Dan, Thanks for your feedback. See my response inline. On Wed, Apr 26, 2023 at 3:25 PM Dan Romascanu wrote: > Hi Jensen, > > Thank you for your email and for addressing my comments. > > See in-line. > > Regards, > > Dan > > > > > On Tue, Apr 25, 2023 at 4:01 PM Jensen Zhang > wrote: > >> Hi Dan, >> >> Sorry for the delay. Many thanks for your review. Please see our response >> inline below. >> >> On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 4:00 PM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker < >> nore...@ietf.org> wrote: >> >>> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >>> Review result: Has Nits >>> >>> Ready with Nits >>> >>> This document defines YANG data models for Operations, Administration, >>> and >>> Maintenance (OAM) & Management of ALTO. The operator can use these data >>> models >>> to set up an ALTO server, create, update and remove ALTO information >>> resources, >>> manage the access control, configure server discovery, and collect >>> statistical >>> data. >>> >>> I like this document. It is clearly written and very well structured. I >>> liked >>> the description of requirements, the information model corresponding to >>> the >>> requirements, and the extension example modules in the Appendices. These >>> are >>> all very useful for operators who need to understand and use the YANG >>> modules. >>> >>> Understanding and using this document requires a good knowledge of ALTO. >>> >>> My review is focused on the design and data modelling issues relevant for >>> operations and manageability. I did not perform a YANG review, I assume >>> that >>> YANG Doctors review is performed separately. >>> >>> This document is Ready with a couple of editorial comments. >>> >>> Editorial & Nits: >>> >>> 1. There are many more acronyms not included in Section 3 or expanded at >>> first >>> occurrence. Maybe the respective acronyms sections in the ALTO documents >>> should >>> be mentioned / referred >>> >> >> Thanks for pointing out this issue. We have included all the acronyms >> that occur in the document in Sec 3. You can check the changes in our early >> edit [1]. >> >> [1]: >> https://ietf-wg-alto.github.io/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang.html#name-acronyms-and-abbreviations >> >> But we are not sure if the acronyms that only occur in the YANG modules >> should also be included. >> > > I believe that the answer is yes. There is no other separate abbreviations > section for the YANG modules. > > > >> >> >>> >>> 2. In Section 5.3.1.2 >>> >>> > In practice, multiple ALTO servers can be deployed for scalability. >>>That may require communication among different ALTO servers. >>> >>>The "ietf-alto" module does not contain any configuration for the >>>communication between peer ALTO servers. Instead, it provides the >>>configuration for how an ALTO server can be discovered by another >>>ALTO server on demand (Figure 6). >>> >>> I understand that the communication between ALTO servers is out of scope. >>> However, I do not understand how is the scalability requirement met. Is >>> there / >>> Will there be another YANG module to define this data model? Something >>> else >>> than YANG? Maybe this is described in another ALTO document that I did >>> not find. >>> >> >> The scalability requirement is not explicitly defined in this document. >> It looks like a part of R1 but is not mandatory. >> >> And I am not quite sure what is the scalability requirement that you >> mentioned here. There can be two kinds of scalability issues: >> >> 1. The scalability of a large number of network domains and elements. >> This issue requires the deployment of multiple ALTO server instances in >> different domains and communications among different ALTO servers in >> different domains. WG is still discussing the related topic [2]. The >> solution is not mature. So we consider it to be out of the scope of this >> document. >> >> [2]: >> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/Hpay0QShfob_3LR7ERfpIjXvGI0/ >> >> 2. The scalability of a large number of client connections. i.e., the >> load balance issue. This may need some autoscaling or load-balancing >> configuration parameters. Is this what you want to add? >> > > I was referring to the scalability issue mentioned in the document in the > sentence 'In practice, multiple ALTO servers can be deployed for > scalability.'. This seems to be related to issue #1 in your answer. If the > solution is considered not mature at this stage, maybe you should mention > just that in the document, to explain why it is out of scope. > Thanks for your clarification. I think the "scalability" in the original text may be ambiguous. We made the following change: OLD: In practice, multiple ALTO servers can be deployed for scalability. That may require communication among different ALTO servers. The "ietf-alto" module does not contain any configuration for the communication between peer ALTO servers. Instead, it provides the configuration for how an ALTO server can be discovered by
Re: [alto] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-06
Hi Jensen, Thank you for your email and for addressing my comments. See in-line. Regards, Dan On Tue, Apr 25, 2023 at 4:01 PM Jensen Zhang wrote: > Hi Dan, > > Sorry for the delay. Many thanks for your review. Please see our response > inline below. > > On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 4:00 PM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker < > nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Dan Romascanu >> Review result: Has Nits >> >> Ready with Nits >> >> This document defines YANG data models for Operations, Administration, and >> Maintenance (OAM) & Management of ALTO. The operator can use these data >> models >> to set up an ALTO server, create, update and remove ALTO information >> resources, >> manage the access control, configure server discovery, and collect >> statistical >> data. >> >> I like this document. It is clearly written and very well structured. I >> liked >> the description of requirements, the information model corresponding to >> the >> requirements, and the extension example modules in the Appendices. These >> are >> all very useful for operators who need to understand and use the YANG >> modules. >> >> Understanding and using this document requires a good knowledge of ALTO. >> >> My review is focused on the design and data modelling issues relevant for >> operations and manageability. I did not perform a YANG review, I assume >> that >> YANG Doctors review is performed separately. >> >> This document is Ready with a couple of editorial comments. >> >> Editorial & Nits: >> >> 1. There are many more acronyms not included in Section 3 or expanded at >> first >> occurrence. Maybe the respective acronyms sections in the ALTO documents >> should >> be mentioned / referred >> > > Thanks for pointing out this issue. We have included all the acronyms that > occur in the document in Sec 3. You can check the changes in our early edit > [1]. > > [1]: > https://ietf-wg-alto.github.io/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang.html#name-acronyms-and-abbreviations > > But we are not sure if the acronyms that only occur in the YANG modules > should also be included. > I believe that the answer is yes. There is no other separate abbreviations section for the YANG modules. > > >> >> 2. In Section 5.3.1.2 >> >> > In practice, multiple ALTO servers can be deployed for scalability. >>That may require communication among different ALTO servers. >> >>The "ietf-alto" module does not contain any configuration for the >>communication between peer ALTO servers. Instead, it provides the >>configuration for how an ALTO server can be discovered by another >>ALTO server on demand (Figure 6). >> >> I understand that the communication between ALTO servers is out of scope. >> However, I do not understand how is the scalability requirement met. Is >> there / >> Will there be another YANG module to define this data model? Something >> else >> than YANG? Maybe this is described in another ALTO document that I did >> not find. >> > > The scalability requirement is not explicitly defined in this document. It > looks like a part of R1 but is not mandatory. > > And I am not quite sure what is the scalability requirement that you > mentioned here. There can be two kinds of scalability issues: > > 1. The scalability of a large number of network domains and elements. This > issue requires the deployment of multiple ALTO server instances in > different domains and communications among different ALTO servers in > different domains. WG is still discussing the related topic [2]. The > solution is not mature. So we consider it to be out of the scope of this > document. > > [2]: > https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/Hpay0QShfob_3LR7ERfpIjXvGI0/ > > 2. The scalability of a large number of client connections. i.e., the load > balance issue. This may need some autoscaling or load-balancing > configuration parameters. Is this what you want to add? > I was referring to the scalability issue mentioned in the document in the sentence 'In practice, multiple ALTO servers can be deployed for scalability.'. This seems to be related to issue #1 in your answer. If the solution is considered not mature at this stage, maybe you should mention just that in the document, to explain why it is out of scope. > > Thanks, > Jensen > > > ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
Re: [alto] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang-06
Hi Dan, Sorry for the delay. Many thanks for your review. Please see our response inline below. On Fri, Apr 21, 2023 at 4:00 PM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker < nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > Review result: Has Nits > > Ready with Nits > > This document defines YANG data models for Operations, Administration, and > Maintenance (OAM) & Management of ALTO. The operator can use these data > models > to set up an ALTO server, create, update and remove ALTO information > resources, > manage the access control, configure server discovery, and collect > statistical > data. > > I like this document. It is clearly written and very well structured. I > liked > the description of requirements, the information model corresponding to the > requirements, and the extension example modules in the Appendices. These > are > all very useful for operators who need to understand and use the YANG > modules. > > Understanding and using this document requires a good knowledge of ALTO. > > My review is focused on the design and data modelling issues relevant for > operations and manageability. I did not perform a YANG review, I assume > that > YANG Doctors review is performed separately. > > This document is Ready with a couple of editorial comments. > > Editorial & Nits: > > 1. There are many more acronyms not included in Section 3 or expanded at > first > occurrence. Maybe the respective acronyms sections in the ALTO documents > should > be mentioned / referred > Thanks for pointing out this issue. We have included all the acronyms that occur in the document in Sec 3. You can check the changes in our early edit [1]. [1]: https://ietf-wg-alto.github.io/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang.html#name-acronyms-and-abbreviations But we are not sure if the acronyms that only occur in the YANG modules should also be included. > > 2. In Section 5.3.1.2 > > > In practice, multiple ALTO servers can be deployed for scalability. >That may require communication among different ALTO servers. > >The "ietf-alto" module does not contain any configuration for the >communication between peer ALTO servers. Instead, it provides the >configuration for how an ALTO server can be discovered by another >ALTO server on demand (Figure 6). > > I understand that the communication between ALTO servers is out of scope. > However, I do not understand how is the scalability requirement met. Is > there / > Will there be another YANG module to define this data model? Something else > than YANG? Maybe this is described in another ALTO document that I did not > find. > The scalability requirement is not explicitly defined in this document. It looks like a part of R1 but is not mandatory. And I am not quite sure what is the scalability requirement that you mentioned here. There can be two kinds of scalability issues: 1. The scalability of a large number of network domains and elements. This issue requires the deployment of multiple ALTO server instances in different domains and communications among different ALTO servers in different domains. WG is still discussing the related topic [2]. The solution is not mature. So we consider it to be out of the scope of this document. [2]: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/Hpay0QShfob_3LR7ERfpIjXvGI0/ 2. The scalability of a large number of client connections. i.e., the load balance issue. This may need some autoscaling or load-balancing configuration parameters. Is this what you want to add? Thanks, Jensen ___ alto mailing list alto@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto
