Some of the language was ambiguous and it seemed like UEFI was optional.
Tighten it up to be clear the EBBR requires UEFI and add some details
about how EBBR informs how UEFI is used for embedded systems.
The block device partitioning section is also moved within the chapter
so it doesn't appear as a subsection of the system environment section
(which mainly talks about the CPU execution mode).
Signed-off-by: Grant Likely
---
source/appendix-a-uefi-features.rst | 2 ++
source/chapter1-about.rst | 17 ++---
source/chapter2-uefi.rst| 29 ++---
3 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
diff --git a/source/appendix-a-uefi-features.rst
b/source/appendix-a-uefi-features.rst
index 0bdc712..709b929 100644
--- a/source/appendix-a-uefi-features.rst
+++ b/source/appendix-a-uefi-features.rst
@@ -1,3 +1,5 @@
+.. _appendix-uefi-requirements:
+
#
APPENDIX A - UEFI Implementation Requirements
#
diff --git a/source/chapter1-about.rst b/source/chapter1-about.rst
index d713cf3..b667f1b 100644
--- a/source/chapter1-about.rst
+++ b/source/chapter1-about.rst
@@ -5,18 +5,21 @@ About This Document
Introduction
-This Embedded Base Boot Requirements (EBBR) specification is intended for Arm
-embedded devices that want to take advantage of the UEFI technology to separate
-the firmware and OS development.
-For example, class-A embedded devices like networking platforms can benefit
+This Embedded Base Boot Requirements (EBBR) specification defines an interface
+between platform firmware and an operating system that is suitable for embedded
+platforms.
+EBBR compliant platforms present a consistent interface that will boot an EBBR
+compliant operating system without any custom tailoring required.
+For example, an Arm A-class embedded networking platform will benefit
from a standard interface that supports features such as secure boot and
firmware update.
-This specification defines the base firmware requirements if UEFI is chosen.
+This specification defines the base firmware requirements for EBBR compliant
platforms.
The requirements in this specification are expected to be minimal yet complete,
while leaving plenty of room for innovations and design details.
This specification is intended to be OS-neutral.
-It leverages the prevalent industry standard firmware specifications of UEFI.
+
+It leverages the prevalent industry standard firmware specification of [UEFI]_.
Comments or change requests can be sent to arm.ebbr-disc...@arm.com.
@@ -24,7 +27,7 @@ Scope
=
This document defines the boot and runtime services that are expected by an
Operating System or hypervisor, for an Arm embedded device, which follows the
-UEFI specification.
+UEFI specification [UEFI]_.
This specification defines the boot and runtime services for a physical system,
including services that are required for virtualization.
diff --git a/source/chapter2-uefi.rst b/source/chapter2-uefi.rst
index d13c19e..a8bd71e 100644
--- a/source/chapter2-uefi.rst
+++ b/source/chapter2-uefi.rst
@@ -2,21 +2,26 @@
UEFI
+This chapter discusses specific UEFI implementation details for EBBR compliant
+platforms.
+
UEFI Version
-
-Boot and system firmware for Arm embedded devices can be based on the UEFI
-specification [UEFI]_, version 2.7 or later, incorporating the AArch64
bindings.
+This document uses version 2.7 of the UEFI specification [UEFI]_.
UEFI Compliance
===
-Any UEFI-compliant system must follow the requirements that are laid out in
-section 2.6 of the UEFI specification [UEFI]_.
-However, to ensure a common boot architecture for embedded-class, systems
-compliant with this specification must always provide the UEFI services and
-protocols that are listed in Appendix A, Appendix B, and Appendix C of this
-document.
+EBBR compliant platforms shall conform to the requirements in [UEFI]_ ยง 2.6,
+except where explicit exemptions are provided by this document.
+
+EBBR compliant platforms shall also implement the UEFI services and
+protocols that are listed in :ref:appendix-uefi-requirements of this document.
+
+Block device partitioning
+-
+
+The system firmware must implement support for MBR, GPT and El Torito
partitioning.
UEFI System Environment and Configuration
=
@@ -50,12 +55,6 @@ UEFI-compliant Operating System.
In this instance, the UEFI boot-time environment can be provided, as a
virtualized service, by the hypervisor and not as part of the host firmware.
-System Volume Format
-
-
-The system firmware must support all partitioning standards required
-by the UEFI specification.
-
UEFI Boot Services
==
--
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