Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-31 Thread Holger Levsen
Hi,

On Sonntag, 31. Mai 2009, Eric Doviak wrote:
> > IMO that means the debian-edu concept is not suitable for this document
> > as it is not intended to be published as a separate manual.

Why? Can you explain, Frans? As Eric explains, those are two different 
documents...

Actually I wanted to reply to him, but don't have anything to add to what he 
wrote :-)


regards,
Holger


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-31 Thread Frans Pop
(No need to CC me, I read the list. I CCed you because you were CCed in 
earlier posts and I'm not sure if you are subscribed.)

On Sunday 31 May 2009, Eric Doviak wrote:
> In summary, the "Illustrated Guide" serves a different audience than
> the official manual does. On that basis, I hope you will consider it
> for inclusion as a separate manual.

I very much doubt that will happen, for the following reasons.
1) I would hate to see translator effort taken away from the official 
installation guide.
2) Your guide, although useful for new users, is rather limited in scope:
   - it only really covers the i386 and amd64 architectures
   - it only covers "simple" installations
3) Because of the screenshots, your manual will be fairly big in size and 
because of that not suitable for inclusion on for example CD images.

Your guide is also essentially (except for the screenshots and some of the 
post-installation stuff you have) already covered by the appendix
"Installation Howto" in the Installation Guide.

So I'd personally like to keep your guide as an unofficial document, just 
as there've been loads of similar documents and web pages in the past. If 
anybody wants to use and translate it, that is of course excellent. But I 
personally don't see us (the D-I developers) adopting it as an official 
document, especially as I don't think we really want to take on the 
implicit responsibility of keeping it up to date.

As the wiki is a community effort, it is IMO a perfect location for the 
document. Publishing it on the Debian website [1] or including it in the 
archive would give it the status I'm not sure it deserves.

Cheers,
FJP

[1] Publishing it on a non-Debian website is no problem of course.


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-31 Thread Eric Doviak

Frans Pop wrote:
IMO that means the debian-edu concept is not suitable for this document as 
it is not intended to be published as a separate manual. We have the 
Installation Guide for that.


This document is intended to remain on the Wiki as an optional reference 
for users and as such translations should also be done and be available 
as wiki pages.
  


With all due respect to the Debian Installer team, who produced a 
fabulous installation manual[1], I would like to encourage you to 
publish the "Illustrated Guide ..."[2] as a separate manual because the 
two documents serve two distinctly different audiences.


The comprehensive nature (143 pages) of the official installation manual 
is invaluable to anyone who has to perform a complex and/or uncommon 
task (such as using TFTP to boot a computer over a network from another 
machine).


The "Illustrated Guide" is designed to serve desktop users who are 
installing a GNU/Linux operating system for the first time. While the 
official installation manual provides a nice 3-page installation HowTo 
(in Appendix A), it does not cater directly to the needs of new 
GNU/Linux users.


By contrast, the "Illustrated Guide" is 10 pages long and is filled with 
screenshots (to make the new user feel comfortable). To add a touch of 
comprehensiveness, I also included 12 pages of appendices to introduce 
them to package management, help them select packages (e.g. office 
software, music managers, etc.) and work with an MS Windows partition.


In summary, the "Illustrated Guide" serves a different audience than the 
official manual does. On that basis, I hope you will consider it for 
inclusion as a separate manual.


Sincerely,
- Eric Doviak


[1] http://www.debian.org/releases/stable/installmanual
[2] http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall



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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-31 Thread Frans Pop
On Sunday 31 May 2009, Holger Levsen wrote:
> The wiki is used to create and edit the english version.
> .po files are used for translation.
> The other tools are used to create HTML and PDF versions from the wikis
> docbook output and the .po files. They are only used when+by building
> the package.

IMO that means the debian-edu concept is not suitable for this document as 
it is not intended to be published as a separate manual. We have the 
Installation Guide for that.

This document is intended to remain on the Wiki as an optional reference 
for users and as such translations should also be done and be available 
as wiki pages.

Cheers,
FJP


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-31 Thread Holger Levsen
Hi Stefano,

On Sonntag, 31. Mai 2009, Stefano Canepa wrote:
> This structure sounds good for me, but I don't understand how do you
> think to manage the wiki pages working this way as it looks like you are
> proposing to use po4a, XML and all other tools used in documentation
> projects.

The wiki is used to create and edit the english version. 
.po files are used for translation.
The other tools are used to create HTML and PDF versions from the wikis 
docbook output and the .po files. They are only used when+by building the 
package.

You can include images in the wiki version and translated images into 
svn, "next to the .po files". If translated images exists, they will be used, 
else the english original ones.


regards,
Holger


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-31 Thread Stefano Canepa
Il giorno sab, 30/05/2009 alle 18.22 +0200, Holger Levsen ha scritto:
> Hi Eric,
> 
> On Freitag, 29. Mai 2009, Eric Doviak wrote:
> [and the rest I removed]
> > > I'd suggest Eric puts this document under a proper licence (/me suggests
> > > GPL2+, just add another appendix add the bottom with the licence text...)
> > > and then hopefully everybody is happy to add/edit content :-)
> > Will do!
> 
> Nice!
> 
> Eric, to make the document easily (=so I can re-use existing code) 
> translatable and to create PDF and HTML versions, you need to have a defined 
> structure in the wiki. It's quite easy and I'm happy to help, so don't 
> worry :)
> 
> Look at the wiki source of these two pages, you will need to create similar 
> ones:
> 
> http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/
> http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/AllInOne
> 
> I suggest you also look at and copy these pages:
> 
> http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/Translations
> http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/CopyRight
> http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/AppendixA
> (All the pages names are arbituray as long as they are listed in the index 
> and 
> AllInOne pages, which have to have these names. Subpages are also possible.)
> 
> So for your guide I'd suggest to use the following URLs:
> 
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/AllInOne
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/About
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/FirstSteps
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/InstallationProcess
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/Translations
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/CopyRight
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/AppendixA
> http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/$and_so_on...
> 
> If you do this, the result will look similar to 
> http://maintainer.skolelinux.org/debian-edu-doc/ and be available as .debs. 
> Translations are done with .po files (and thus standard tools).
> 
> If you have any further questions, please dont't hesitate to ask me! I'm 
> happy 
> to help :-)

This structure sounds good for me, but I don't understand how do you
think to manage the wiki pages working this way as it looks like you are
proposing to use po4a, XML and all other tools used in documentation
projects.

Bye
Stefano

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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-30 Thread Holger Levsen
Hi Eric,

On Freitag, 29. Mai 2009, Eric Doviak wrote:
[and the rest I removed]
> > I'd suggest Eric puts this document under a proper licence (/me suggests
> > GPL2+, just add another appendix add the bottom with the licence text...)
> > and then hopefully everybody is happy to add/edit content :-)
> Will do!

Nice!

Eric, to make the document easily (=so I can re-use existing code) 
translatable and to create PDF and HTML versions, you need to have a defined 
structure in the wiki. It's quite easy and I'm happy to help, so don't 
worry :)

Look at the wiki source of these two pages, you will need to create similar 
ones:

http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/
http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/AllInOne

I suggest you also look at and copy these pages:

http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/Translations
http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/CopyRight
http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Lenny/AppendixA
(All the pages names are arbituray as long as they are listed in the index and 
AllInOne pages, which have to have these names. Subpages are also possible.)

So for your guide I'd suggest to use the following URLs:

http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall
http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/AllInOne
http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/About
http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/FirstSteps
http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/InstallationProcess
http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/Translations
http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/CopyRight
http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/AppendixA
http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall/$and_so_on...

If you do this, the result will look similar to 
http://maintainer.skolelinux.org/debian-edu-doc/ and be available as .debs. 
Translations are done with .po files (and thus standard tools).

If you have any further questions, please dont't hesitate to ask me! I'm happy 
to help :-)


regards,
Holger


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-29 Thread Eric Doviak

Frank Lin PIAT wrote:

Your recommendation aren't consistent with Debian.
  
Given my preference for consistency over confusion, I will definitely 
edit the guide to make it consistent with Debian's recommendations. Just 
give me a week or two to make the changes. I'm rather busy at the moment.




 * openoffice, gimp, ekiga, pigin... are installed by default[1]
   so there is no need to explain how to install them. 
Explaining that the packages are there is also valuable information, so 
instead of removing those items, I think I'll just include a note that 
says that they are installed by default.




* Debian has chosen to install openoffice rather that abiword and
   gnumeric, so it's awkward that your first example is to install
   it.
  

Shuffling the order shouldn't be too difficult. Will do!



Also the wiki pages http://wiki.debian.org/WindowsEquivalent aims to
list equivalent application, *in* Debian. It isn't complete yet.
  

I'll definitely include that list. (I might even add to it myself).


Holger Levsen wrote:
I'd suggest Eric puts this document under a proper licence (/me suggests 
GPL2+, just add another appendix add the bottom with the licence text...) and 
then hopefully everybody is happy to add/edit content :-)
  

Will do!


Thanks Franklin and Holger!
- Eric


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-29 Thread Holger Levsen
Hi,

On Freitag, 29. Mai 2009, Frank Lin PIAT wrote:
> Just a quick comment regarding...

I'd suggest Eric puts this document under a proper licence (/me suggests 
GPL2+, just add another appendix add the bottom with the licence text...) and 
then hopefully everybody is happy to add/edit content :-)


regards,
Holger


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-29 Thread Frank Lin PIAT
Hello,

On Wed, 2009-02-18 at 13:01 -0800, Praveen A wrote:
> 2009/2/18 Eric Doviak :
> > For people who are new to GNU/Linux and are simply trying to install Debian
> > on a home desktop, I wrote an "Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian
> > GNU/Linux."[3]
> 
> Some comments,
> Now openjdk is in debian so it is better to suggest it over gcj.

Just a quick comment regarding the Appendix D "Suggested Packages".

Your recommendation aren't consistent with Debian.
 * openoffice, gimp, ekiga, pigin... are installed by default[1]
   so there is no need to explain how to install them.
 * Debian has chosen to install openoffice rather that abiword and
   gnumeric, so it's awkward that your first example is to install
   it.

Also the wiki pages http://wiki.debian.org/WindowsEquivalent aims to
list equivalent application, *in* Debian. It isn't complete yet.


Great guide, thanks

Franklin



[1] reminder, to list package installed by default (without
dependencies), use
  tasksel install -t desktop
  aptitude search ~t^desktop\$ ~t^gnome-desktop$
The base system is:
  aptitude search ~prequired ~pimportant ~pstandard
A few other package could be auto-installed like popcon and
hardware related packages.


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-29 Thread Holger Levsen
Hi Stefano,

On Donnerstag, 28. Mai 2009, Stefano Canepa wrote:
> I'll try to find out the time to translate it into italian.

ok, you cannot (sensible) translate it yet. But I also got an offer for a 
spanish translation, so I plan to go ahead and provide the means for proper 
translations soon. I'll get back in touch with you once that has happened.


regards,
Holger


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-28 Thread Stefano Canepa
Il giorno lun, 25/05/2009 alle 19.36 +0200, Holger Levsen ha scritto:
> Hi Eric,
> 
> On Sonntag, 22. Februar 2009, Eric Doviak wrote:
> > At Holger's suggestion, I placed the "Illustrated Guide to Installing
> > Debian" on the Debian Wiki[1].
> > [1] http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall
> 
> Cool!
> 
> > I'm not sure what the next step is here, so please let me know what
> > else I can do/should do to help.
> 
> 
> I'll blog about it, to make it a bit more known :-)

I'll try to find out the time to translate it into italian.

Stefano

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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-05-25 Thread Holger Levsen
Hi Eric,

On Sonntag, 22. Februar 2009, Eric Doviak wrote:
> At Holger's suggestion, I placed the "Illustrated Guide to Installing
> Debian" on the Debian Wiki[1].
> [1] http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall

Cool!

> I'm not sure what the next step is here, so please let me know what
> else I can do/should do to help.


I'll blog about it, to make it a bit more known :-)


regards,
Holger




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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-02-21 Thread Eric Doviak
At Holger's suggestion, I placed the "Illustrated Guide to Installing
Debian" on the Debian Wiki[1].

The text is pretty much the same, but I made some changes so that it
would be appropriate for Debian documentation (e.g. removing the word
"I," removing my opinions, etc.). At Praveen's suggestion, I also
recommended that users install the "icedtea-gcjwebplugin" (which uses
OpenJDK) instead of "java-gcj-compat-plugin."

I'm not sure what the next step is here, so please let me know what
else I can do/should do to help.

Enjoy!,
- Eric

[1] http://wiki.debian.org/LennyIllustratedInstall


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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-02-19 Thread Holger Levsen
Hi Eric,

On Mittwoch, 18. Februar 2009, Eric Doviak wrote:
> For people who are new to GNU/Linux and are simply trying to install Debian
> on a home desktop, I wrote an "Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian
> GNU/Linux."[3]

Very nice!

> I never intended to create an official Debian document, but -- if you think
> that it is of good quality 

I definitly think so!

http://wiki.debian.org/DebianEdu/Documentation/Etch/ is written in a similar 
spirit (see the GettingStarted guide there). (But it's targetted at yet 
another audience then your document.)

It is maintained on the Debian wiki (this only works with an editor who 
reviews all edits and acts when needed), and then turned into the 
debian-edu-doc package, see it's source code to see how :)

Then it's translated via .po files and the resulting html and pdf versions are 
put online at http://maintainer.skolelinux.org/debian-edu-doc/ - as well as 
uploaded to debian as the debian-edu-doc package.

(Work on the lenny version has begun, but hasn't been finished by far. Just 
replace s/Etch/Lenny/ in the above wiki.d.o URL.)


regards,
Holger


P.S.: I've set the reply-to to the debian-doc mailinglist, please cc: me on 
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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-02-18 Thread Praveen A
ccing debian-doc.

2009/2/18 Eric Doviak :
> Dear Debian Installer Team,
>
> Congratulations on the recent release of Debian Lenny.
>
> I would also like to tip my hat to the people who worked on the installation
> guide[1] and its translations into 16 languages. They did a fantastic job.
> The comprehensive nature of that 141-page guide is invaluable to anyone who
> has to perform a complex and/or uncommon task (such as using TFTP to boot a
> computer over a network from another machine).
>
> The trouble with comprehensiveness is that it frightens a new user who is
> simply trying to set up a home desktop. For them, Debian's official
> installation guide is not a good introduction to Debian and it is completely
> at odds with the spirit of projects like Robert Millan's
> Goodbye-Microsoft.com[2], where the goal is to provide the simplest possible
> transition from MS Windows to Debian GNU/Linux.
>
> For people who are new to GNU/Linux and are simply trying to install Debian
> on a home desktop, I wrote an "Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian
> GNU/Linux."[3]
>
> The guide is 10 pages long and is filled with screenshots (to make the user
> feel comfortable). To add a touch of comprehensiveness, I also included 12
> pages of appendices to help them select partition sizes, introduce them to
> package management, etc.
>
> When I wrote the guide, I had the users of Goodbye-Microsoft.com in mind, so
> I submitted it to Robert Millan, who asked me to send it to you.
>
> I never intended to create an official Debian document, but -- if you think
> that it is of good quality -- I would be happy to help you turn it into one
> ("source code"[4] and all 73 screenshots[5]).
>
> Let me know what you think of the documents and please let me know what I
> can do to help make Debian more friendly to new users.
>
> Thanks,
> - Eric Doviak
>
>
> [1] http://www.debian.org/releases/stable/installmanual
> [2] http://goodbye-microsoft.com/
> [3] http://www.doviak.net/debian/debian_install_guide.pdf
> [4] http://www.doviak.net/debian/debian_install_guide.tar.gz
> [5] http://www.doviak.net/debian/debian_install_shots.tar.gz
>
>
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Re: Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-02-18 Thread Praveen A
2009/2/18 Eric Doviak :
> For people who are new to GNU/Linux and are simply trying to install Debian
> on a home desktop, I wrote an "Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian
> GNU/Linux."[3]

Thanks, this is nice.

Some comments,
Now openjdk is in debian so it is better to suggest it over gcj.

Also I would like to see these docs part of debian.
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Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian GNU/Linux

2009-02-18 Thread Eric Doviak
Dear Debian Installer Team,

Congratulations on the recent release of Debian Lenny.

I would also like to tip my hat to the people who worked on the installation
guide[1] and its translations into 16 languages. They did a fantastic job.
The comprehensive nature of that 141-page guide is invaluable to anyone who
has to perform a complex and/or uncommon task (such as using TFTP to boot a
computer over a network from another machine).

The trouble with comprehensiveness is that it frightens a new user who is
simply trying to set up a home desktop. For them, Debian's official
installation guide is not a good introduction to Debian and it is completely
at odds with the spirit of projects like Robert Millan's
Goodbye-Microsoft.com[2], where the goal is to provide the simplest possible
transition from MS Windows to Debian GNU/Linux.

For people who are new to GNU/Linux and are simply trying to install Debian
on a home desktop, I wrote an "Illustrated Guide to Installing Debian
GNU/Linux."[3]

The guide is 10 pages long and is filled with screenshots (to make the user
feel comfortable). To add a touch of comprehensiveness, I also included 12
pages of appendices to help them select partition sizes, introduce them to
package management, etc.

When I wrote the guide, I had the users of Goodbye-Microsoft.com in mind, so
I submitted it to Robert Millan, who asked me to send it to you.

I never intended to create an official Debian document, but -- if you think
that it is of good quality -- I would be happy to help you turn it into one
("source code"[4] and all 73 screenshots[5]).

Let me know what you think of the documents and please let me know what I
can do to help make Debian more friendly to new users.

Thanks,
- Eric Doviak


[1] http://www.debian.org/releases/stable/installmanual
[2] http://goodbye-microsoft.com/
[3] http://www.doviak.net/debian/debian_install_guide.pdf
[4] http://www.doviak.net/debian/debian_install_guide.tar.gz
[5] http://www.doviak.net/debian/debian_install_shots.tar.gz