Hi Raphael
Quick question. When I got the above feedback, pretty sure I recall going
to the handbook page a doing a quick online browse to see how the accepted
changes turned out. Also pretty sure I saw all the changes I sent back!
I went back today to look at something again and can't see any of the
changes. Maybe I'm going mad, but just wanted to check if there has been a
roll-back maybe to an earlier version since I last looked at it?
Thanks.
On Fri, Jan 9, 2015 at 8:22 PM, Raphael Hertzog wrote:
> Hi Carey,
>
> sorry for the delay of my answer.
>
> On Sun, 28 Dec 2014, Carey Walker wrote:
> > Here's a first attempt. Just one appendix for now. 99% style/readability
> -
> > haven't attempted anything much technical.
>
> It's good! I have merged it with a few fixes:
>
> > @@ -123,8 +123,8 @@ Documents Music Public
> >file with
> >“text” as its contents. Adding a line
> >at the end of this file is possible too, with a command such as
> > - echo "line"
> > - >>file.
> > + echo "moretext"
> > + >>file. Note the >> in
> this example.
>
> ">>" should have been ">>" and possibly marked with some
> tag: >>
>
> > @@ -288,7 +288,8 @@ tmpfs 514208269136245072
> 53% /dev/shm
> >
> > /proc/ and /sys/
> > are specific to the Linux kernel (and not part of the FHS). They
> > - are used by the kernel for exporting data to user-space.
> > + are used by the kernel for exporting data to user-space
> > + (see the section following for a description of the User
> Space).
> >
>
> Here you should put a real cross-reference link:
> (see and linkend="sect.user-space" /> for explanations about this
> concept)
>
> > - The restriction described here is only a corner
> > - case. The actual restriction is that there can only be one
> > + The limitation described above of only one process being
> able to run
> > +at a time, doesn't always apply. The actual restriction is that
> there can only be one
>
> Try to wrap lines at 80 characters.
>
> >For more complex communications, there are also mechanisms
> >allowing a process to open access, or share, part of its
> > - allocated memory to other processes. Memory shared between them
> > - can be used to move data across.
> > + allocated memory to other processes. Memory now shared between
> them
> > + can be used to move data beteen the processes.
>
> s/beteen/between/
>
> Cheers,
> --
> Raphaël Hertzog ◈ Debian Developer
>
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