Bug#661980: jenkins-memory-monitor: [PATCH] debian/control: Fix grammar in description

[tony mancill]

On 03/03/2012 12:19 AM, Paul Menzel wrote:
 Package: jenkins-memory-monitor
 Version: 1.5-1
 Severity: normal
 Tags: patch
 
 Dear Debian folks,
 
 
 I hope the inlined patch applicable with `git am --scissors` is useful.
 
 I am not sure about the s/jenkins/Jenkin’s/ change. Additionally reading
 the description I am not sure about »integration for« and if it should
 be changed to »integration of«.
 
 Maybe the Debian English team(?) (Smith(?)) can review the description.

Hello Paul,

Thank you for pointing out the grammar issues in the description.  I
have fixed this in the packaging repository and marked the bug fixed
pending the next upload of the package.  I don't think that Jenkin's
is appropriate in this context.

For future reference, description typos are normally filed with a
severity of wishlist.

Cheers,
tony



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Bug#661980: jenkins-memory-monitor: [PATCH] debian/control: Fix grammar in description

[Paul Menzel]

Package: jenkins-memory-monitor
Version: 1.5-1
Severity: normal
Tags: patch

Dear Debian folks,


I hope the inlined patch applicable with `git am --scissors` is useful.

I am not sure about the s/jenkins/Jenkin’s/ change. Additionally reading
the description I am not sure about »integration for« and if it should
be changed to »integration of«.

Maybe the Debian English team(?) (Smith(?)) can review the description.


Thanks,

Paul

--- 8 - 8 ---

From 27ecae8262bb20dc55b705053de8b2bc402db8c1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Paul Menzel pm.deb...@googlemail.com
Date: Sat, 3 Mar 2012 09:01:58 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] debian/control: Fix grammar in description

---
 debian/changelog |7 +++
 debian/control   |   12 ++--
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/debian/changelog b/debian/changelog
index c4f7442..cc329ac 100644
--- a/debian/changelog
+++ b/debian/changelog
@@ -1,3 +1,10 @@
+jenkins-memory-monitor (1.7-1.1) unstable; urgency=low
+
+  * Non-maintainer upload.
+  * debian/control: Fix grammar in description
+
+ -- Paul Menzel pm.deb...@googlemail.com  Sat, 03 Mar 2012 09:02:37 +0100
+
 jenkins-memory-monitor (1.7-1) unstable; urgency=low
 
   * New upstream release.
diff --git a/debian/control b/debian/control
index 1511c9b..7014e86 100644
--- a/debian/control
+++ b/debian/control
@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@ Architecture: all
 Depends: ${maven:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: ${maven:OptionalDepends}
 Description: Jenkins native integration for monitoring memory usage.
- This library provide native integration for monitoring memory and
- swap usage from with Java code. It is used by the Jenkins CI
- application to monitor these statistics on jenkins master and
+ This library provides native integration for monitoring memory and
+ swap usage from within Java code. It is used by the Jenkins CI
+ application to monitor these statistics on Jenkin’s master and
  slave nodes.
 
 Package: jenkins-memory-monitor-doc
@@ -34,9 +34,9 @@ Depends: ${maven:DocDepends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Recommends: ${maven:DocOptionalDepends}
 Suggests: jenkins-memory-monitor
 Description: Documentation for jenkins-memory-monitor.
- This library provide native integration for monitoring memory and
- swap usage from with Java code. It is used by the Jenkins CI
- application to monitor these statistics on jenkins master and
+ This library provides native integration for monitoring memory and
+ swap usage from within Java code. It is used by the Jenkins CI
+ application to monitor these statistics on Jenkin’s master and
  slave nodes.
  .
  This package provides the API documentation for jenkins-memory-monitor.
-- 
1.7.9.1


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