Bug#709280: lxc: Minor English syntax errors in README.Debian.

2013-05-22 Thread Jeremiah C. Foster
Package: lxc
Version: 0.9.0-4
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Dear Daniel,

Firstly, thank you for all your very good work
for Debian.

I'd like to provide a simple patch for some very minor 
English syntax errors I found in the README.Debian file.

-- System Information:
Debian Release: jessie/sid
  APT prefers testing
  APT policy: (500, 'testing'), (1, 'experimental')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)
Foreign Architectures: i386

Kernel: Linux 3.2.0-4-amd64 (SMP w/4 CPU cores)
Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash

Versions of packages lxc depends on:
ii  debconf [debconf-2.0]  1.5.50
ii  libapparmor1   2.7.103-4
ii  libc6  2.13-38
ii  libcap21:2.22-1.2
ii  multiarch-support  2.13-38

Versions of packages lxc recommends:
ii  debootstrap  1.0.49
ii  libcap2-bin  1:2.22-1.2

Versions of packages lxc suggests:
ii  debian-keyring  2013.04.21
ii  gpgv1.4.12-7
pn  live-debconfig-doc  none
ii  rsync   3.0.9-4

-- debconf information excluded
From 5f20fd49d3491472e57b4ce4eb73c025adda7a5e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeremiah C. Foster jeremiah.fos...@pelagicore.com
Date: Wed, 22 May 2013 11:49:01 +0200
Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Changes to lxc.README.Debian

---
 lxc.README.Debian |   15 ---
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/lxc.README.Debian b/lxc.README.Debian
index 51010f5..5de92e8 100644
--- a/lxc.README.Debian
+++ b/lxc.README.Debian
@@ -6,18 +6,19 @@ LXC for Debian
 
 LXC needs various cgroup related features enabled in the Linux kernel.
 
-If you use a non-Debian kernel, you can check your kernel configuration with the
-lxc-checkconfig tool.
+If you use a non-Debian kernel, you can check your kernel
+configuration with the lxc-checkconfig tool.
 
-If you use a Debian squeeze kernel, all of the features are enable except the
-resource controller, means, you can use LXC just fine but cannot limit the use
-of RAM per container. Every container can use as much RAM as the host system
-offers. See http://bugs.debian.org/534964 for more information.
+If you use a Debian squeeze kernel, all of the features are enabled
+except the resource controller. This means that you can use LXC but
+cannot limit the amount of RAM used per container. Every container can
+use as much RAM as the host system offers. See
+http://bugs.debian.org/534964 for more information.
 
 If you use a Debian wheezy kernel or newer, all of the features are enabled
 including the resource controller.
 
-Note: Kernel version before 2.6.36 do crash when using two bridge network
+Note: Kernel version before 2.6.36 crashes when using two bridge network
 interfaces with LXC. If you need more than one bridge on the host system,
 make sure you upgrade your kernel first.
 
-- 
1.7.10.4


Bug#709280: lxc: Minor English syntax errors in README.Debian.

2013-05-22 Thread Daniel Baumann
tag 709280 pending
thanks

please do not create patches against outdated versions (and filling them
against the current version at the same time).

the first change worsens the wrapping (and doesn't change anything
else), i did not apply that.

the second change improves the wording, i applied that with corrected
wrapping.

the third change doesn't make sense, i fixed that differently.

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Email:  daniel.baum...@progress-technologies.net
Internet:   http://people.progress-technologies.net/~daniel.baumann/


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