Bug#755515: developers-reference: A bit strange wording in the NMU section

2014-07-21 Thread Andreas Rönnquist
Source: developers-reference
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Dear Maintainer,

The current version of the developers-reference contains the
following wording in the NMU section:

 or fixes for trivial bugs that blocking a transition,

which feels a bit strange. I would suggest that are blocking, that
blocks, or maybe simply blocking

See the attached patch against current git for a suggestion on better
wording.

thanks and best regards
-- Andreas Rönnquist
gus...@gusnan.se


-- System Information:
Debian Release: jessie/sid
  APT prefers unstable
  APT policy: (500, 'unstable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 3.12-1-amd64 (SMP w/1 CPU core)
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From bd9d8d20126ed5ee95e6802b2f967cd2fd6adb98 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Andreas=20R=C3=B6nnquist?= gus...@gusnan.se
Date: Mon, 21 Jul 2014 17:03:03 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Fix wording in NMU section

---
 pkgs.dbk | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/pkgs.dbk b/pkgs.dbk
index 873c42c..a58a9ae 100644
--- a/pkgs.dbk
+++ b/pkgs.dbk
@@ -2059,7 +2059,7 @@ Other NMUs: 10 days
 
 para
 Those delays are only examples. In some cases, such as uploads fixing security
-issues, or fixes for trivial bugs that blocking a transition, it is desirable
+issues, or fixes for trivial bugs that blocks a transition, it is desirable
 that the fixed package reaches literalunstable/literal sooner.
 /para
 
-- 
2.0.1


Bug#755515: developers-reference: A bit strange wording in the NMU section

2014-07-21 Thread Matthias Urlichs
Hi,

 which feels a bit strange. I would suggest that are blocking, that
 blocks, or maybe simply blocking
 
The second choice is not grammatically correct.
that block is better.

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-- Matthias Urlichs


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Bug#755515: developers-reference: A bit strange wording in the NMU section

2014-07-21 Thread Andreas Rönnquist
 Hi,
 
  which feels a bit strange. I would suggest that are blocking,
  that blocks, or maybe simply blocking
  
 The second choice is not grammatically correct.
 that block is better.
 
 -- 
 -- Matthias Urlichs

Alright - New version of path attached.

-- Andreas Rönnquist
gus...@gusnan.se
From f4ba05b85255ac8de8f240626cce93fb4ae7249e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: =?UTF-8?q?Andreas=20R=C3=B6nnquist?= gus...@gusnan.se
Date: Mon, 21 Jul 2014 20:13:43 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] Fix typo in NMU section s/blocking/block/

---
 pkgs.dbk | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/pkgs.dbk b/pkgs.dbk
index 873c42c..68af723 100644
--- a/pkgs.dbk
+++ b/pkgs.dbk
@@ -2059,7 +2059,7 @@ Other NMUs: 10 days
 
 para
 Those delays are only examples. In some cases, such as uploads fixing security
-issues, or fixes for trivial bugs that blocking a transition, it is desirable
+issues, or fixes for trivial bugs that block a transition, it is desirable
 that the fixed package reaches literalunstable/literal sooner.
 /para
 
-- 
2.0.1



Bug#755515: developers-reference: A bit strange wording in the NMU section

2014-07-21 Thread Charles Plessy
Control: tag -1 + pending

Le Mon, Jul 21, 2014 at 08:16:05PM +0200, Andreas Rönnquist a écrit :
 
 Alright - New version of path attached.
 
  Those delays are only examples. In some cases, such as uploads fixing 
 security
 -issues, or fixes for trivial bugs that blocking a transition, it is desirable
 +issues, or fixes for trivial bugs that block a transition, it is desirable
  that the fixed package reaches literalunstable/literal sooner.

Applied, thank you.

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Charles Plessy
Tsurumi, Kanagawa, Japan


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