Re: [Draft] GR: diversity statement for the Debian Project

2012-05-04 Thread David Weinehall
On Fri, May 04, 2012 at 10:14:06AM +0200, Lucas Nussbaum wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> On 03/05/12 at 00:32 +0200, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> > It doesn't matter how you identify yourself or how others perceive you:
> > we welcome you. We welcome contributions from everyone as long as they
> > interact constructively with our community.
> 
> I'm not a big fan of this formulation. Maybe it should be a bit less
> personal, without the use of we/you ?

I personally love this kind of phrasing.  This is supposed to be a
statement that makes people feel welcome.  Contrast "We welcome you"
with "The Debian project welcomes contributors".  The latter phrasing
(or other non-personal ways of putting it) seems, at least to me --
admittedly not a native English speaker -- quite cold.


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Re: [Draft] GR: diversity statement for the Debian Project

2012-05-04 Thread Raphael Hertzog
Hi,

On Fri, 04 May 2012, Lucas Nussbaum wrote:
> On 03/05/12 at 00:32 +0200, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> > It doesn't matter how you identify yourself or how others perceive you:
> > we welcome you. We welcome contributions from everyone as long as they
> > interact constructively with our community.
> 
> I'm not a big fan of this formulation. Maybe it should be a bit less
> personal, without the use of we/you ?

I know that in French we tend to avoid such formulations, but in English
it's actually better that way. I believe we should keep it like it is.

(I know because I had to change the "style" when translationg the debian
admin handbook)

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Re: [Draft] GR: diversity statement for the Debian Project

2012-05-04 Thread Lucas Nussbaum
Hi,

On 03/05/12 at 00:32 +0200, Francesca Ciceri wrote:
> It doesn't matter how you identify yourself or how others perceive you:
> we welcome you. We welcome contributions from everyone as long as they
> interact constructively with our community.

I'm not a big fan of this formulation. Maybe it should be a bit less
personal, without the use of we/you ?

Lucas


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