Bug#793769: ITP: down -- A simple game written in Ruby/SDL
Marcin Mielniczuk writes: > Package: wnpp > Severity: wishlist > Owner: Marcin Mielniczuk > > Subject: ITP: down -- A simple game written in Ruby/SDL > Package: wnpp > Owner: Marcin Mielniczuk > Severity: wishlist > > * Package name: down > Version : 1.0.0 > Upstream Author : Yutaka Hara > * URL : http://route477.net > * License : MIT > Programming Lang: Ruby/SDL > Description : A simple game written in Ruby/SDL > > Did you ever play Icy Tower? Did you ever have the opportunity to play it > downwards? Now you have! > > It's simply a nice game :) > It's my first package to be maintained, I guess I'll simply contact the > original author whenever some bugs arise and push updated versions. I don't > expect many issues, though :) Please consider a more informative short description. End users likely do not care much about the language their favourite game is implemented in. So while this information might be interesting to some, it should probably go to the long description, and the short description should hint at what this game is actually about. Maybe mention that is is a modified clone of Icy Tower? -- CYa, ⡍⠁⠗⠊⠕ -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-wnpp-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: https://lists.debian.org/87bnex7b5t@fx.delysid.org
Bug#793769: ITP: down -- A simple game written in Ruby/SDL
Thanks for your remarks! > On Mon, 27 Jul 2015 11:37:14 +0200 > Marcin Mielniczuk wrote: > > [...] >> * Package name: down >>Version : 1.0.0 >>Upstream Author : Yutaka Hara >> * URL : http://route477.net Well, it should've been http://route477.net/w/Down.html > The page by that URL does not mention the project you intend to package. > Or at least I failed to locate it there. > >> * License : MIT >>Programming Lang: Ruby/SDL >>Description : A simple game written in Ruby/SDL > "written in Ruby/SDL" is implementation specific and has nothing to do > with package's description. Please be more descriptive and concrete. > Supposedly something like > "An Icy Tower-like game which can be played downwards" > might be just OK. > > The general rule of thumb for writing a package's description is that it > should deliver as much as possible information to a *previously > uninformed* user. The user which looks for games is not concerned with > which software stack was used for development, but should receive a > clear hint of what this game is about just from looking at its > description in the list their software package manager presents them > with. "An 2D Icy Tower-like game in which you go down the tower" - what about this? > >> Did you ever play Icy Tower? Did you ever have the opportunity to >> play it downwards? Now you have! > The extended description could supposedly be toned down a bit, > and then extended. > > Please understand that you're not a marketologist or advertisement > specialist here, and your task is not about raising an excitement of a > potential customer by any means. > Luckily, we don't sell, we just deliver. ;-) > > [...] Thanks for the remark :) It's my first package in Debian. In Maemo no one cared much about the description - it was the dev's thing.l What about You jump down the tower and need to reach as deep as possible. But be careful to avoid the spikes! To aid you in your quest you'll be able to gather a couple of power-ups. -- Marcin _ Send and receive anonymous emails to your inbox with InboxAlias. http://www.inboxalias.com
Bug#793769: ITP: down -- A simple game written in Ruby/SDL
On Mon, 27 Jul 2015 11:37:14 +0200 Marcin Mielniczuk wrote: [...] > * Package name: down > Version : 1.0.0 > Upstream Author : Yutaka Hara > * URL : http://route477.net The page by that URL does not mention the project you intend to package. Or at least I failed to locate it there. > * License : MIT > Programming Lang: Ruby/SDL > Description : A simple game written in Ruby/SDL "written in Ruby/SDL" is implementation specific and has nothing to do with package's description. Please be more descriptive and concrete. Supposedly something like "An Icy Tower-like game which can be played downwards" might be just OK. The general rule of thumb for writing a package's description is that it should deliver as much as possible information to a *previously uninformed* user. The user which looks for games is not concerned with which software stack was used for development, but should receive a clear hint of what this game is about just from looking at its description in the list their software package manager presents them with. > Did you ever play Icy Tower? Did you ever have the opportunity to > play it downwards? Now you have! The extended description could supposedly be toned down a bit, and then extended. Please understand that you're not a marketologist or advertisement specialist here, and your task is not about raising an excitement of a potential customer by any means. Luckily, we don't sell, we just deliver. ;-) [...] -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-wnpp-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: https://lists.debian.org/20150727132226.18182643f1d1d3faa0721...@domain007.com
Bug#793769: ITP: down -- A simple game written in Ruby/SDL
Package: wnpp Severity: wishlist Owner: Marcin Mielniczuk Subject: ITP: down -- A simple game written in Ruby/SDL Package: wnpp Owner: Marcin Mielniczuk Severity: wishlist * Package name: down Version : 1.0.0 Upstream Author : Yutaka Hara * URL : http://route477.net * License : MIT Programming Lang: Ruby/SDL Description : A simple game written in Ruby/SDL Did you ever play Icy Tower? Did you ever have the opportunity to play it downwards? Now you have! It's simply a nice game :) It's my first package to be maintained, I guess I'll simply contact the original author whenever some bugs arise and push updated versions. I don't expect many issues, though :) I need a supporter - I don't have the rights to put the deb into the repos. -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-wnpp-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: https://lists.debian.org/20150727093714.8739.76417.reportbug@marcin
