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Clement Escoffier commented on FELIX-2827: ------------------------------------------ Hi, I've updated the page. Will be sync shortly. Thanks ! > Spelling Mistake > ---------------- > > Key: FELIX-2827 > URL: https://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/FELIX-2827 > Project: Felix > Issue Type: Bug > Components: Documentation > Reporter: Andriyko > Assignee: Clement Escoffier > Labels: grammar, spelling > > In the Providing OSGI services: > http://felix.apache.org/site/providing-osgi-services.html#ProvidingOSGiservices-Instancereconfiguration > The mistakes are: > 1. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", first sentence in parenthesis, > first word should be "from" not "form". > 2. Under "Service Serving & Object Creation", in the bullet points under > "Other strategies are available:", first point: "strategy="instance" allows > creating one service object per asking iPOJO instance (despite they are in > the same bundle)" - I find the use of word "asking" weird here, and the > wording inside the parenthesis is confusing - what is in the same bundle as > what? > 3. In the section titled "Several Service Providing (XML only)", "Several > Service Providing" is not a proper sentence or a combination of words, I > think. > 4. Under "Several Service Providing (XML only)", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence: > "All this provided service will be manage" - should be "managed". Also it is > not clear what is meant by - "by the same handler but separately", how can > the same handler manage them "separately", as opposed to "together"? > 5. Under "Service Property Propagation", 1st paragraph, 2nd sentence, ends in > "to all published service.", should be "services". > 6. Section titled "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services" > perhaps should be titled "Publishing an Abstract or Concrete class as a > Service"?. Same change must be carried into the 1st sentence. > 7. Under "Publishing abstract and concrete class as services", last sentence > of the section "However, such practice are not recommended.", should be "is > not.". -- This message is automatically generated by JIRA. - For more information on JIRA, see: http://www.atlassian.com/software/jira